Hot damn!

I love Salad Fingers. And you've done an amazing job, i could actually see this being a episode. Truly amazing

The wasp scene is definitely Firth. The writing was concise enough with all the necessary detail. Only mistake I'm seeing in this is your use of "it's." Remember that "it's" is a contraction of "it is." "Its" is possessive.

As for Salad Finger's arbitrary remarks, that's tricky to do. The mention of peanut butter rung a little discordant with me. Perhaps something more popular amongst the English. I want to say Vegemite but I think that would be too much of a brand-name for Salad Finger's world.

I don't read fanfiction often, and this kept my interest. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing this continued.

currry munchers everywhere in this land of ths salad fingers and his friends :*

Spot on. You've utterly captured the character of Salad Fingers. The wasp part, whilst disturbing (nothing wrong with that, I like disturbing) was also believable (well, for salad fingers) and sounds like something he would do.

Haha! Awesome job! I totally miss Salad Fingers...

The part with the wasp made me shudder but it was still soooo good!

I've always been drawn to these weird and disturbing things, and when I first saw salad fingers on YouTube, I had to see if anyone had ever written anything about it. You did a phenomenal job with this, it's the perfect next episode, great job!

this could be a real episode, i can imagine everything. loved the way u described the wasp part, great imagery

This was phenomenal.

Oh my god. That is the most disturbing thing I have read since a sideshow Bob X Lisa Simpson paring. Really well written, I could really hear Salad Fingers saying the things he said and (unfortunately :P) visualise it too! You should send this to David Firth :)

You need to make more of this. I like it more than I like Rusty Spoons!

I'm not being mean but I'm just surprised they made a salad fingers archive. I just watched salad fingers on YouTube and usually when I see a story from a flash game or on YouTube I go on fanfiction to see if they have an archive. And I'm surprised salad fingers has one. By the way awesome story!

dude, thats epic, gotta love youtube vids :p you described it really well, and im glad SOMEONE has decided on its gender :p some say its a guy others say its a girl, to me...well its a green thing with creepy fingers and a lonely hallucinating disposition :p awesome story :)

luv, Sassyprincess

This is probably the most messed up thing I've ever read but it's so disturbingly amazing I love it! lol XD