i need more of this plz! this is definetely one of the best fix-its i have ever ead! plz complete this! its just wow

I have just finished the 10 chapters you have written. I'm sure that real life has intruded as it usually does which would explain the last 5 years. I really hope that you find time to continue writing and updating; this story in particular.

Pls more! It’s so good

Like this story you put alot of time and effort into working out what also could have happened if someone didn't feel that only Dumbledore was the only one with all the answers. plus lily she would bring a lot of skills to the group.

I also like how you've tied Peter into the group. great idea.

Justine final thought I have always thought that Dumbledore always planned that Harry would have to die as he was a horcux- for the greater good. one person dies for the good of many.

I like the changes made. I wish to see all the sound containers found before voldy dies to good. Don't know if Harry should be the one to defeat him as a baby if you want his parents to survive to. If they die I wonder if Harry will go to his grandparents rather than his aunt. More chapters please.

I loved it, yes. :)

*The Marauders being geniuses* O.o ... WE SHARE THE SAME HEADCANON! :D

*Near the top of chapter 2* O.O ... *Now shivering* I, no offense to book-movie Snape, now FEAR for Lily's life; 'cause while in the books/movies CLEARLY state that THOSE Snapes love Lily, THIS ONE clearly DOESN'T and I now fear for her. I HAVE to give my compliments to you, you made a VERY creepy atmosphere while describing Lily's feelings/fear of Snape, and now I do too. - When it comes to YOUR snape anyway. I believe that book/movie Snape DOES love Lily. :) - So yeah, congratulations on making me flat-out scared of YOUR Severus Snape. :) *James shows up* Oh, good. *Breathes in relief* Well, *THIS'LL* be interesting.

Brilliant so far. :D And I agree with your note, Peter needs more GOOD stories.

Okay the last update for this was 2014, but i can honestly see, what with all the hype for grindlewald's crimes, that this could be turned into a decent prequel movie. Granted it would scrap up some of the "canon" Potter Universe, but we know next to nothing of what the group did prior to the war, with the exception of joining the Order.
Anyway, good story and hope you will continue, even if its four years old.

Love this thing. I read to the end of Ch 10, but I'm leaving my review here because... because. I look forward to seeing more, whenever more is available. I really wish I had the energy for a long, involved review right now, because you deserve one. I mean, really, this is really really good. Wow.

You're not going to update this, are you?
Well, since you aren't, I'm just going to say this:
This is fantastic. The plot progression, the character building, the world building, are all so mesmerizing and magical that it is very hard to contain my fascination. What you have done with the Marauders is what I wish JK had done with them, but at the same time, I'm glad she didn't. Your writing lends to your story far more than hers ever could. The timeskips, and I can't believe I'm saying this, make the story BETTER. All their emotions, feelings, bonds, are so strong and complex and unflinching that I can't contain myself! I want there to be more. I want to see how they grow, how they change, what the war in your head is like. I understand that that is not to be. You haven't updated since 2014.
I wish you would continue, but nonetheless, thank you for writing this. It's amazing, and brilliant, and all manner of positive superlatives. :)

I absolutely love this story; especially the characterization. I hope you will be able to continue this.

Wow. Love what you’re doing here.

Hi Ravyn,
I just wanted to gush over your work for a bit. I love your approach to the Harry Potter fandom in this fic. I've always thought the boys had to be smart to create their pranks, and your characterization of them utiziling said smarts for other things was in spot. Did you know that your works were so amazing that I was able to read your Rourouni Kenshin works without knowing a thing about the show I the fandom? No matter how much I read, I always come back to your page for a pick me up, or just for enjoyment.
Thank you so much for writing,
Sassassin256