wow this was pretty great

You used rule nr. 18 twice. Once for „never guess your punishment“ and once for „never hesitate when lying“. Yeah. I do not know why I said that. It really doesn‘t matter. But hey! Great book!

this is one of the best fan fics ever

You know I always wonder how the Mist pulled a teacher out of thin air. Where did she come from?

You should write a fanfic about Aphrodite and Hephaestus and ares being jealous of Hephaestus because those were my favourite bits

I love the cute moments between Aphrodite and Hephaestus this story makes me laugh so much

This is actually better than reading the book itself, because I get the original text AND some great reactions

Dionysus is gonna be in so much trouble for getting everyone drunk. I'm really enjoying this, it's corny, but fun, and I like the different personalities of the gods showing up occasionally.

Ok. Well this looks interesting.

This is amazing!

Just want to say, this is really good, okay?

i feel like... the characters are way too ooc. way. too. ooc. and in some parts their reactions are too dramatic, like "they were all laughing hysterically" when the scene they're laughing at isn't really all that funny, and in other scenes, their reactions don't have enough,,, effect? i guess? like, annabeth should probably be having a breakdown when the book mentions tartarus, i feel like. also, the actual book excerpts have a lot of mistakes in them.

Wow! I really hope you do this for the other books as well, that would be brilliant!

it was brilliant the whole way through at the end I think you lost it

I like it