Reviews for Paranoia
MSGrateful chapter 30 . 3/10/2019
I just read this again, and am still bummed it hasn't been completed. I really hope you get inspired to finish this. The story line is so different, and it has some of my favorite moments in it. In particular:
"I can touch my nose with my finger like the colour, please like the colour, please like the colour...Olivia slammed her cane down hard on the table with a deafening bang, making everyone jump, 'I SAID, DO YOU STILL WANT TO FUCK WITH ME, BITCH?'"
Paranoia DESERVES an ending. Please?
lizzard9 chapter 30 . 2/6/2017
Omg, I have not laughed this hard in a while. You have hit the behaviors of a traumatic brain injured person on the head. So impulsive, and so very honest. Lack of filters when they speak. I love it.
brooke1004 chapter 26 . 8/12/2016
This is good stroy, also I want to read the original unedited version.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/15/2016
More! Please post more! This is great stuff! SO glad you're back!
Faith Ann Tucker chapter 30 . 7/17/2016
You have a great story here. Thank you so much for leaving the smut out...I'm not into smut, just fluff. I would like to find out what happened with Gerard and if Masters and Gerard are working together. I hope Liv gets completely back to her old self. Great story here. Update soon.
JaneXalien chapter 29 . 7/17/2016
i laughed so hard :D good story
Faith Ann Tucker chapter 2 . 7/16/2016
Oh heavens Olivia! Give Elliot a break...lol. Seems like Elliot is always in the doghouse with somebody...lol
spacekitten2700 chapter 29 . 7/16/2016
please more
JaneXalien chapter 30 . 7/16/2016
I dont know your stories, I am quite new here, but I am up to reading them if there is a possibility you will end them :) I especially prefer long E/O stories (M rated :D ). good luck in the hospital I know how it sucks there
charleighxo chapter 30 . 7/15/2016
I'm so happy you're back and yes please please please finish Paranoia its truly my fave.
Cinderella1268 chapter 30 . 7/15/2016
So great to have you back!I truly missed your amazing stories,damn straight I want you back to finish them all,and to add a lot more to your awesome list!Paranoia and Heritage are my absolute hun,looking forward to the beginning of the new,the completion of the earlier amazing stories. EOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRR..
Cinderella1268 chapter 29 . 7/15/2016
Lol!I am so happy you are back!This has to be one of my absolute favorite EO stories!I am tickled pink everytime I read your work is wonderful,this one ALWAYS bring joy,laughter and make my day!Olivia is really crazy,poor perp did't know that he was messing with the one and only badass Benson!And Elliot!Lol!He should be proud!Great writing,terrific story. EOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRR..
carrie fischer chapter 30 . 7/15/2016
I would love to see the end of these stories.
Steph2323 chapter 30 . 7/15/2016
Please, please continue this awesome story. Love it.
Cinderella1268 chapter 29 . 1/8/2015
FANTASTIC!Like I said before,HILARIOUS,SEXY,FABULOUS!Badass,kickass Benson in action,sweet!Elliot is one lucky mutha!I still hope you get to complete this awesome,realistic and beautifully written story,loved it. EOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
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