| Reviews for Me in KHR World? |
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Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2015 Sorry I cant read this anymore. Hibari is OC. Crappy writing/grammar, loopholes |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/25/2015 one of the many writing/grammar errors: "You will reject this." -dont you mean "you will regret this." If she can fight and defeat Kyoya then why didn't she try to fight Squalo?... |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2015 Erm...why is she not panicking? I mean she was somehow transported into Katekyo Hitman Reborn world, so shouldn't she be panicking imstead of being chill/comfortable about it? doesn't she care about her life, family, friends etc in her own world? oh why would she tell the bad guys that she's ' prophecy one', because thats really stupid. Your grammar sucks... |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2015 Why would you say that your the 'prophecy one'?..,..thats kind of stupid |
ilovshibari chapter 8 . 7/18/2013 plz update soon! i love this story |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/7/2012 okay! I will wait... |
Anna the Viking XD chapter 8 . 7/7/2012 Aw ok get it up soon thought please |
ffupnnerak chapter 7 . 5/30/2012 I love your story! Hope you update it soon! u |
xxaikixxeden chapter 6 . 1/6/2012 I want a COOKIE! I just had one, but I want another...haha! Anyway, I like your story a lot! Someone finally more superior than Hibari! Yay Reina! I wonder if you will reveal the "codes" later on. The story can go deeper if you do, but otherwise, good luck! And gimme cookie plz! |
thearistocrat chapter 7 . 11/6/2011 This story is so interesting! The only thing I don't understand is what happened with the character. In the first chapter, and with "Basilicum" (which I don't understand why she can't say Basil-kun, if that's what you're going for or not) she showed a lot of emotion. Mostly being scared, but a lot of it was felt and seen and understood from the text. Now, she's hiding her feelings and emotionless. And in the first chapters, it seemed she had no idea what any prophecy meant and who she was that made her special, but once she entered Tsuna's world, she knew everything and was comfortable with it, as if it had always been that way and she wasn't a teenager running for her life from people she'd read about in a manga. That's all that stumped me. Despite that, this is really fun to read. Her character is still good and Hibari is a little OOC, but I won't even complain about that. Unless he's singing and picking daisies, I'll never complain about an OOC Hibari. p Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope to read more soon. ] |
Gone Bye-bi chapter 6 . 9/5/2011 Go Reina! Teach that Carnivore a lesson xD |
kira86 chapter 5 . 9/2/2011 i love it. it is sad and cute. |
Kushiroyume chapter 5 . 9/1/2011 Hibari seems soft~ so soft i wanna hug him... I sorta feel a little mary-sue...but that's to be expected, 'cause that happens alot to me.. -.-' |
Gone Bye-bi chapter 5 . 9/1/2011 Now this is interesting :D Sorry for taking so long to read it... But I love it! :D Update soon! |
April Marciano chapter 4 . 8/31/2011 well, i'm feeling kinda off with hibari being ooc |