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Are you going to update? Well... I like it! FOOURTRIS ALL THE WAY!

-Ace

i love this! you should continue it, there is definitely not enough four/tris stories. and i love it from four's pov. or at least do another one shot of his pov during the chasm scene and back at his room? thats definitely my favorite part!

Oh... I quite like this... I'm such a FourTris fan it's not even funny... :) Really like the line "I place my hand on Tris' back, not really knowing what I'm doing." I was thinking, yeah you know what you're doing Four... ;)

Mezza

Wow, this is such a great fic! I think one of the reasons it works so well is because it TOTALLY could've happened! I mean Four probably did know Tris back in his Abnegation days! And you had him totally in character! AWESOME FIC!

Oh my goodness! I loved it. It was very true to Four's character.

Please update soon! :)

And I love your username, very funny.

good job. i like it

Please update soon! I really wanna see how this point of view plays out...

Brilliant. True to Four's character :) Good job.

Awesome!

The first thing that I did whenever I finished reading Divergent was look for fanfic. You have done an excellent job rumbling around in Four's head. :)

Any story that has Four POV is automatically intriguing. :) It's so cool to be here from the beginning and watch the FF grow, thanks for your story. :) TEAM FOURTRIS!

Yay! More Divergent fanfics! Thanks so much for writing this. Please, please, PLEASE update soon :)

Will this be Four's POV? If so, this will be great! Update soon!

Short and sweet, I like it :). There's not really much to say, except that Tris and Four are awesome and so is this POV change!