This hit home, like, way to close then anything should. The last line... it does hurt sometimes, to live. And what makes me so mad is that people say that suicides don't look good, but it's the people around the one who took their own life who are to blame. Like, what did they do to make this person in their lives hate themselves so damn much, that they felt the only way they could rest was to rest FOREVER? And they are the ones who do damage. You don't choose to feel depressed and such. It's up to the people around you to make sure that you have enough self-love to keep going. To get up everyday, and think of life as a gift, not a burden. I had to battle my problems alone. I would never want my children, if I have them, to feel like what they felt should be kept inside, and fought alone.

Sorry, this is really long.

So good and sad :(

*confused*

i like the poem but i guess i cant truly like something i dont understand...

That was a great poem.

This is soo sad

this was soooo cute, i believe someone has a talent for poetry here *cough* you *cough*

Very good, though kinda sad :(. Poor Clary and Jace... I liked it a lot though. Good work!