In the name of everything holy, it should be illegal for something to be this awesome.

I have goosebumps!

No why did it have to end like that I wanted to to read more, it was getting so interesting I would be really happy if you added more to this chapter made like a second-story. Best short story I have ever resd in my life but I wish it was longer

Awwww

THAT WAS AWESOME!
no other words are needed

Wow...That was...interesting...

cute :3

Wow. There are absolutely no words to describe how this made me feel. It was amazing, wonderful, awesome, etc. Gahh! I just can't decide what word to use exactly! Hahaha. Anywho, I love this very much and I'm glad I have read it.

hey its katherine loves kisses im sorry! i wrote the wrong review on this story im sorry the last reviiew was suppose to be for ur story Bittersweet sacrafices :( im sorry i love this story too :DD the romance was soo fluffy :3 ahh blossom urs soo lucky that u get to kiss brickie c; ahh it made my heart melt i hope u can write more :D i love it this is goin to my favorite list :DDD

Please update soon! i love this! :3 cant wait for greens romance/fluff/parts/moments :DD also i cant wait for the reds too :3 i hope buttercup tells butch about her baby c: i hope the baby is a boy! :DDD the boy can be a mini me version of butch but with buttercups apple colored eyes :D gahhh buttercup please keep the baby and tell butchie boy! he'll be surprised but at the end he'll be happy :p and he deserves to know that baby D: needs a daddy in their life :(

This is sweet and fluffy. :33

I like your language, and your grammer is great. :D

Your describtion is also good. Keep it up! x33

*sniff* beautiful! * blows nose*

This is so beautiful..

I swear it made me tear up... :')

This story is

P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N

Thank you so much for writing it

I love it! It was just like, perfect, you wrote them perfectly. Awesome story!

Ahhhh yet another wonderful oneshot from you. XD So cute. There are a few grammatical errors, as I have told you, but besides that this was quite an enjoyable oneshot. Very cute. Great job, dear!

Yay for one-shots! D

Great job! This one was just as great as all the others! Keep writing! )