/god damn/ this is different and i like it! it's sorta weird to know all the current canon as opposed to the comics but i can roll with it so far and it's pretty fun honestly

/oh/ oh that is so much worse than civil war /yikes/

well this is already going better than canon avengers. also, uh oh.

God this whole thing was utterly perfect, but what a cliffhanger! I so wish you would come back to finish this eventually. I feel for poor Bucky and long for everyone to just be happy in the end. Although I am a huge Hawkeye/Black Widow shipper (I much prefer Bucky with Darcy when it's not Steve with Darcy) I was enjoying the angsty triangle thing you had going. I felt bad for Clint since Natasha was obviously choosing Bucky near the end, though I'm holding out hope. Maybe they can commit to a threesome lol. Anyway, I loved this all the way through and am crossing my fingers and praying you'll come back to this someday! Also, I hope you don't mind but I added you as friend on Facebook, so SO not a creepy stalker if you see the request. I'm Rose Ann Mott over there.

You know Steve was on tour with a bunch of women for a long time. He's most likely heard women curse and seen them all naked and slept with a bunch of them.

A brilliant story and I hope to read more soon. Well done.

OMG, this is getting really dramatic...I love it! XD Sam with powers? YES! That could totally happen to him, LOL. I wish you the very best of luck on your writing, and I hope you decide to finish this story someday!

Yikes! What a way to end the chapter! I stumbled across this fic last night and only grudgingly stopped reading because I had to be up at an insane hour this morning, and dove back in as soon as I could. I would love to see this tale put on film; it's better than most of the action movies I've seen. It's been a number of years since this last chapter was posted and I hope that you will come back to finish the story if your life and muse let you do so. You've done an outstanding job with this-truly outstanding!

**my friend's face as i frantically swipe at my kindle and cry for the next chapter after reading the whole story in one sitting..OMG this is amazing. i love that you've made the heros humans and the humans super enough to help save the world... they are all doing it together and it is amazing. i hope there is more soon.

Okay, you've got me crying now. And flailing, and /shit/...

But seriously, this is like, everything I could ever want in the damn movie but /better/ and compared to this at least the novelized version of the movie sucked. Wow. If only they'd put their efforts into something like /this/...
Granted, made exactly as is into a live action movie this would probably take at /least/ twelve hours to /watch/, given my reading speed and how many hours it took me to read it, but it would be /SO/ worth it.

*burrows back under covers and cries self to sleep now*

Well shit on a stick. Skrull are bad. Skrull are very bad.

Good call- most of the movie screen Spidey sucks compared to his comic book awesomeness. So far this is our Friendly Neighborhood Spiderman we love.

Ah. It's a little bit easier to write that kind of scene as a script because you can just slap the names there with the lines in quotes for most of it and action notes in parentheses- actual writers like our esteemed author here have to actually flesh things out a little more without toppling the flow of the conversation or confusing the reader. Good job on that, by the way, miss.

*delight*

Please update with more chapters!