I fucking love this. I must have more. Keep up the great work.

I feel like it would've been a better one-shot if you hadn't repeated some stuff and simply left the cool lines for the end. As it was by the time I got to the second half of the chapter my thinking was along the lines of "You just said that, can't you think of something else to say?"

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It's an interesting read hopefully you continue it

Awesome story, I'd love to see more

Damm it was getting good.

I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto developed a Joker-like personality considering his childhood. That is the beauty of fanfiction. So many ideas from a simple ''what if?''

Not bad. I just couldn't help but recognise the parts when Naruto was talking to Sasuke. It was from "Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker" from the flashback when the Joker turned Robin into "something else" (No more Spoiler for those who didn't watched the movie).
Nicely done. Though you should make a sequel, where Naruto and his girls continue with the plan and kill Orochimaru, the Akatsuki and a bigger part of Konoha.

Awesome must have more evil leaf payback in blood

Pretty amusing fic.

u should expand on this.

supert history

man that was awesome and so much fun to read. I loved it
Draco122

Hahaha, ah entertaining stuff.

Well done.

nice story