This was the LESS creepy version? Really?

... this is unusually dark and..

horrifying.

I'd imagine, if I'm Danny, I would beg for death.

Very deep and emotional. I like your stories :)

Wow, this is really good. I love the story Domination and this just polishes said jewel even more. Your writing style is very good, very logical (great for Vlad especially). I really like it :)

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Oh goodness this was wonderful too! Again, beautiful imagery and symbolism! I LOVED the nightmarish bathroom scene. Very twisted. I throughly approve. XD I really really can't wait to delve more into Danny's head, and Vlad's too, of course. You have some excellent insight into their characters, insight that I feed off of like a leech. :D Thank you so much for taking the time to write this! It really means a lot!

Still awesome. :D

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