You make me giggle. So, is there going to be a sequel?

This was so cte and hot and I love your writing sytle and grammar and shit and the endnotes are nice and not too TMI. Also thank you! Because out of the four of five M rated Sterek fics I've read so far this was either the first or one of the first to actually prepare which then helped me enjoy the next bit more. And Stiles is right. Some written porn is really descriptive ;)

So this is ace and you are such a good writer and this is so real they way they're dealing with their feelings

Lov it

Its good

It's so good, I can't wait to keep reading :)

Ahh. Derek is always at the bottom. Stiles admitted how he felt and Derek feels that he has to protect him.

Poor Derek. He's really taking it hard. ; Maybe Stiles will tell Derek how he really feels.

Aww. It's sweet. Derek really cares about him. I hope this ends well. They belong together.

So Derek likes Stiles and Stiles likes Derek. Well on the series there is some intense chemistry between the two. Derek seems annoyed by Stiles above all others. You'd swear they are mind screwing each other every time they are around one another LOL

LOL wow. Things could've been worse. It's always funny to see Stiles like that. Wonder what's going to happen next.

Great story! I loved it so much! Thank you for posting! :)

I think your writing just crushed my heart.

I'm so glad someone else sees Kate as a harpy from Hell. Also, I enjoyed the fact about alphas being monogamous. Stephanie Meyer has ruined an entire generation with those sparkly disco balls she writes about. Derek and Stiles were meant to be together after Magic Bullet.

That was a great story! It really had me going! Thanks for writing that!