| Reviews for FEROCITY |
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   SlashboyandboyLover4ever4life chapter 1 . 2/6/2019 AWESOME |
| SlythClover chapter 1 . 9/21/2013 LOL in the end XDD Oh my, I was so ill-at-ease at the beginning but this last catching phrase...It just cracked the whole tension up XD Again, congrats for your poems ! It is true I like your poems more than your stories, because of the music on the one hand, and because you're always so hard on Riki on the other..." See you soon in FF ! Clover |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2013 Great ! I was a bit reluctant first, and I read pretty fast because of it, but the last line made me litteraly fall from my bed so I took a second look. And as many commenters already, a deep bow for your poetic prosis. Short, but great. No : short and great :) |
| Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 WHAT DO YOU MEAN ROUND TWO, YOU DUMBASS? |
| shadow halfbreed chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 lol, wow, I was actually a bit worried to read at the thought of how rough Iason can get...but that was actually written really well, nice work :) |
| 5123 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012 Nice! Like the smex hot! More please :) |
| Nemesis La Algol chapter 1 . 6/12/2012 As it is said here : "the Master is ruthless tonight." ' ! |
| Midnight Arsevell chapter 1 . 3/6/2012 Wow um this is some hard core stuff you wrote. I like it but daayyuummmmm can u write it more in detail. We want the yaoiness in the yaoi!ยก |
| Maidenrose chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 Yep round 2! And now! |
| Diana Prince chapter 1 . 8/19/2011 Ah that was good and quick. Just saw the anime today very good easily a favorite. Good job on the story. |
| Atticus Hill chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 This is exciting to read! Love how rhythmically attuned those two were with each other! How Iason knew just how rough he could take Riki and still keep him bound and in love with him. Love this! Very beautiful indeed! |
| Sapphire-sama Dreamer chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 This was very nice. I think the style in which you wrote it is very unique. |
| Saber Wing chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 It's rough, and passionate, just like their love. Your prose matches Iason and Riki's relationship here perfectly, and that's awesome. I loved this _ |
| selena23loveless chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 Short and very rough, but you put passion in it! I don't really like these violent relationships, but don't let yourself discouraged by me n_n I would like to read that one shot, as long as it's more gentle than this. |
| Cerberus Revised chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 What a great short piece, the poetic quality makes for powerful reading. Each line like its own quick thrust, ending with a most satisfying climax. I agree with other reviewers, the last few lines left me with a satiated smile. "Chains jangle, garments rip. Blue eyes rake exposed flesh." one can hear the sounds of this line, feel the violence. "Bodies undulate, cries escalate. Pet is pillaged as hearts exasperate."Love this combination of words. Another well done AnK piece. It leaves me ready for another round as well... :) |
