| Reviews for Fortune's Fool |
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Guest chapter 46 . 3/9 Thank you |
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 48 . 10/28/2018 holy rice shitting shinobiall their cousins! at 1st,it's totally surprised me when they/u named their children minato and mikoto! which those names are from 1 of their parents! and I don't see why the fuck they don't think about it like they don't know if they named their childs by their name especially minato; BOI... that boy is even more darker and insane than sasuke! u should just name him menma instead. i thought by naming him after his grandfather will be like the minato i used to know; gentle,wise,bright and not reckless. while menma that i used to know in RTN movie and some filler,he's kinda cold,dark,and smart; now that name will suits him. even that boruto(B.N.N) brat isn't as dark as him after all what naruto do to him; too busy and let's not make me get started with how similar he is with indra,6th paths oldest son; i'm done with him... and let's also not forget with that song that mikoto had sang back in chapter 44; that shit was scared me shitless and its lyrics are disturbing asf despite the situation they're in at that moment and speaking about kurama,i think it's kinda already too late for taming that fox; it's already like...what? 17 years or more since the 4th world war; naruto is already 30th where now he's supposed to be the 7th hokage... in canon,he tamed kurama when he's still 16 ... which this issue is where i got anxious with that fuckindeath" word on ur warning of this fanfic; everybody can die for all i care BUT sasuke and naruto and kabuto? i think i miss something... was he died? and that origin of the preg(ana)nant 6th paths tho XD so,let's see... he have 2 sons; check,... there's no doubt his sons name are indra and ashura; check,... his husband is a male;...okayyy ... that's definitely not writen on the history book(manga/anime) so far,this is the longest mpreg i ever read. and its annoying politic shits about execute the uchiha and that do-the-abortion shit or whatever is makes me exhausted to no end after all of those shouts,yells,whimpers,snorts that comes out from me through the story ...if u're here,staring at me when i'm reading ur story and blabbering nonsense at the same time,u will understand... well... i can't help it... andd,once again... where . the . actual . fuck . is . juugo? |
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 19 . 10/27/2018 it feels like my heart is getting claustrophobic cuz of my tightened ribcage EVERY GODDAMN TIME THAT OLD HAG SPITTING HER UNACCEPTABLE PLAN THROUGH HER SAKE SCENTED MOUTH |
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 12 . 10/26/2018 fucking konohaaaaaaaaaa! DX This story makes me suffocating! and it's SUCKS ASF that nobody want to just fucking listen to naruto! they wouldn't never shut their big mouth are they?! Somehow,it's seems more like the whole world is turns against them... |
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 7 . 10/26/2018 "sometimes,u have to accept ." the old hag said then... "sometimes,there's a time when i hate konoha,including stunade, as much as i hate danzothe other councils old farts" that's why i kinda wish if naruto indeed will die in burrito then i wish sasuke will burn konoha to ashes... idk why i want him to destroy konoha if naru died honestly. it just... feels right(?) |
BettyeK chapter 41 . 12/13/2017 The story is great! I'm just wondering if we will ever get to meet Mikoto as well. *wink* I can't wait til the update. I am not usually fond of m-preg but, this is not your typical type of situation, so nice job! |
Guest chapter 47 . 7/27/2017 Please update this story soon! Cassie07 |
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 1 . 2/20/2017 Woah there. This is unexpectedly so awesome! First chapter and it's already roaring in action! |
STARtheSuperNatuGirl chapter 1 . 4/1/2016 OHMYGOSH! I FINALLY FOUND THE FICT I'VE BEEN LONGING SINCE FOREVER AGO! YASS oh FYI, I read this fict before, around the year of 2012 or 2013. And when my phone (the one i used to read a bunch of fics) broke down, I lost this fict. And I thought I'd effin lost this fict for forever, but Thank God I found this again. You have no idea how much time I've spent just to fins this fict AGAIN. I have spent hours, days, weeks, months, even YEARS just to read this fict again. And let me tell you girl, I usually give up when I can't find a fict I once read, but with yours *sniff* it's worth the time. And hell, this isn't really like what I remembered (and since I found out that you just edited the chapters) I am still glad that you didn't make this story way too different from what I know. I'm a happiest girl ever because of you... One thing though; why didn't you have more followers, readers, and favorites? Because there are many ficts out there not as good as this one, but they got lots of readers and favorites and followers. I suggest you promote your story a bit more, like post in on your facebook or something. oh, and I'm checking out your AO3 acc as well. I LOVE YOU |
Tee chapter 48 . 3/16/2016 Update soon |
DJmiso chapter 37 . 1/6/2016 *throws self all over the place* WHAT! |
DJmiso chapter 35 . 1/6/2016 everytime sasuke didnt say anything i pictured my chibi throwing him off a cliff. AND THEN RHEY SPOKE. FINALLY. i hate him so much in the show but i can admit he is a dynamic part of naruto's life. i still hate him, though. hmf. stupid uchiha. |
DJmiso chapter 33 . 1/6/2016 jfc, this is driving me nuts! |
DJmiso chapter 20 . 1/6/2016 that... was too badass. naruto, i have always loved you, but holy fuck do i love you even more! what have you done to me, author! |
NarupokeeAurorafan chapter 48 . 12/28/2015 Hey ! Just asking where's our new chspter thar you promised us last month ;D ! I love this story soo much and it's getting good and to the climax ;D ! Please update soon bye* and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year :D ! |