Reviews for Riptide
nancyjeanne chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
Either way, I enjoyed your story very much, thank you!
EngLitLover chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Very nice
Avila Addy chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Great story!

Totally blame Jane! 90 minutes is a huge amount of time to leave someone unattended!
jessfaith0912 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Adorable!
4leafclover0120 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Ahhh...this was a cute short!
Harriet Vane chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Perfect one-shot, this is one of my favorites. Reminds me of my summers on the Oregon coast. I love Darcy as a surfer - well done )
Wendi 'Triplet Mom' Sotis chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I think you did the perfect job of scolding them... how about we just scold you for not making this longer ;) because I really want more.

I absolutely LOVED this! Thanks so much for sharing it!

Wendi
Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
This Story is so good to be only one chapter has so much potential. I hope you try a story .
2950638 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Of couse we have to blame Jane and Bingley! I physically cannot blame Darcy, he's too awesome and AMAZING!
S.C.Mema chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Loved this look at Malibu Barbie and Ken. Good job, Rafe! Gayle / S.
TEB chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Hey that was a great little ditty!

Very enjoyable. Nice to see you are still writing.
YepItsMe chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Great story! Ive never thought of a surfing Darcy before but the image is pretty darn yummy, I must say.

As for the scolding, let's start with Jane, for being a normal human being and forgetting to take care of others while selfishly trying to get back the love of her life. Lol Although really, Jane and Bingley should not be expected to take the place of a trained lifeguard.