awesome! is there more? a sequel maybe?

This was so freakin good and really well written! )

Wow...this was...wow! I recently did a quicky search for Alastiar and hell!Dean stories which took me to your story "Pet". It was so well written, that I took a lookie at your other fics. I am not a wincesty kind of girl, but my GOD this was so well written...so compelling...disturbing...sad...and dare I say it...titillating! I don't even know what to say...but thanks for those words. Gosh, I'm just so, so impressed. Beautifully written. Just stellar.

Maybe I should feel bad for enjoying this story so much... but I don't.
Amazing read, you are a great writer, as you had me feeling all of the nervousness that you described!

I'm a huge fan of incestuous stories - no matter how many years in Hell that'll buy me, I just can't let them go!

But this story? Absolutely my favourite that I've read so far!

You capture that submissive and obedient side of Dean so well and convincingly that I picture this as if it were an episode on the series. And when you came to the deviancy parts and them snapping at each other, I felt the tension and crawled up my spine and tickled my ears in ways that cannot be explained ways P I felt the turmoil Dean endured and the guilt from the disobedience right down to my core because of the way you painted it and voiced it to me ;D There was NEVER a dull moment or anything of the such lacking in this story - I swear if there were even grammar or spelling errors in it I skipped them (which I don't usually do) due to how well done this story was written :)

I thoroughly enjoyed the emotions and the angst and am really glad you carried on with this story - made my day reading it :D I think the 2 best things you did for this story were to write from Dean's POV and to make him a teenager - I think that's the time in his life where he would have felt this emotions the strongest and reacted the way he does much better than if he were older.

Congratulations on writing something so dynamic and moving and dirty all at the same time the captivates and enthrals readers at such a magnificent level :D

PLHR

Omg, I adored that story! For sure the best John/Dean story I've read so far! Much love!

I really like this chapter. I know they can't do anything with Sam in the car but was there after the first time? I would have like to seen a mention. I do love that little moment in the car. Yes please keep adding to this story. I would love to see your take on what happened in Flaggstaff. Can't wait for more.

I loved this chapter. It was just so good. Yes the sex was so hot and good. But there was something more. It seemed like the beginning of something more for John and Dean. Which I think you were going for. I understand why John wanted to be called John and not Dad. I think though that it also without saying raised Dean to lover from just John's soldier. You have got to write more John and Dean chapters or stories. You just have a gift for it even though I know you prefer not to write this type of writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

this was really well done, its great story.

I think you should definitely do Flagstaff

Sweet ending, I for one would like to read more, your take and point of view of their relationship is interesting and refreshingly real. Look forward to Sam finding them out, and the events during flagstaff.

At first I looked at this story and I was sad that you stopped at five chapters. Then I looked inside and was a little mad that the epilogue was only five paragraphs. But you know what, it was sweet. But yeah, I would totally love it if you tried to continue this. Let's see what you come up with! You can explore more of the sweet little affectionate moments between John and Dean.

I would love to see some more in the world... I think it's really interesting. I love how blurry the lines between consensual and non are in the fic. Dean seems to find joy in John and their "relationship" but only because of his daddy issues. I don't personally look at it as a consensual relationship, but I can see how it could be.

I vote for it to be continued!

I really enjoyed this fic and would love to read more in this universe. I loved the way you explored Dean and John's relationship- you didn't just blurt it all out with an omniscient narrator you developed it through your character interction and I think that really worked. :)

Holy crap, that was so good! This was so worth the wait. Excellent writing, there's just no words to describe how awesome this chapter is! Definitely one my favorite stories right now!