So cute! Write another chapter please?

It is a cute story. I like the tactic Tamaki has employed in figuring out what Haruhi likes. Clever indeed.

KYAAAAA
most. adorable. ever.
but Haruhi -sigh- ever so dense. haha.
thank you for this uber cute fluff.

Ahhhhhhh! So precious! This was a real treat, and the characterization was great.

Oh my gosh! That is SO FREAKIN' CUTE! I could just die. I so want a guy to do that for me. But sad I can't even get a guy or matter a fact anyone to look my way.

This was so cute and well planned! Gaaa i wanna fangirl scream!

Please make another chapter! I know I'll be upset if you don't

so cute, i enjoyed reading it!

haruhi is just a bit OOC (whatever, *rolls eyes* still love it!)

THAT WAS AMZING IT WAS SO CUTE! :D GAVE ME BUTTERFLIES X3

! *happy fangirl squeal* me loves tamaharu!

*spastic glompage of you and alll favorite characters, which results in a lot of poofing, punching, and screaming*

You've got their cute innocent love down packed! Congrats! Tamaki was very true to himself and Haruhi, well I'll admit I've never seen that weak side of her but it was tastefully done. If I might, I would only criticize your lack of physical description. The dialogue is great, one of the main factors that make a story great, but with a few more descriptive words and explanations as to their surrounds I think you'll be an amazing writer.

Cute! It's funny because I could totally see that going down! haha!

Sorry, but I feel like you have not spent the time to watch all the episodes of Ouran. Haruhi isn't girly. She doesn't care about whether or not Tamaki is in love with her. Also, at the end of the anime, Haruhi still does not know that she has feelings for Tamaki, and Tamaki, well, he's still an idiot, but he will never self-congratulate himself.

The out of character-ness in this fanfic is not caused by the plot. That's my honest opinion.

The other thing that I felt was off is this sentence: You mean I shouldn't ask her on a white-railed veranda overlooking the Seine, but the gazebo out here in the maze like I planned should be fine.

Everything following the "but" caused me to reread the sentence again and again without understanding any of it. I think you might be missing a word or some form of punctuation, at least. The "like I planned should be fine" added to the confusion that I had with that sentence. Another thing about this sentence that I think you should look over is whether or not the comma after Seine is trying to separate a compound predicate or not. A compound predicate is a predicate with at least two verbs joined by a conjunction. A comma only should be there if you are joining to independent clauses.

Yes, this was sooo soo soo super cute. I loved it. But if I were you, I would change your summary. Its too descriptive, and I knew how it would end. I could help you if you want. Oh, and ill b sure 2 read your Percy Jackson ff