Well Chuck Shurley has been confirmed as God. Season 11. But you wrote this lovely story before then :)

Great story!

Thos story was pleasantly surprising. I mean it shouldnt have been but I was mildly surprised by the choices and how well everything worked. By the way, I like storys with a few loos ends. It lets the reader have something to think about when its all said and done.
Glad I read it!

I'm only going to give this story a chance for a few more chapters, so if it's still grinding it's wheels and doing nothing by then I'm going to drop this.

I feel like skimming until he either accepts or ultimately rejects the idea of becoming a vessel. That's when things will presumably pick up, so the rest kinda seems like a waste of time.

WOW. Just wow. Wonderfully written.

You know what the only thing that could make me love this more would be if Shawn of he'll even Cas killed metatron. If you have been keeping up with supernatural you will understand.

This was much better than i thought it would be! Well done!
You were really in character with everyone and a very original plot.
I really enjoyed reading!

I rather enjoyed the story; it was worth the read even if I kept getting confused between Season-8-Metatron and your version ;)
Some of the character portrayals could use a bit of work, but I just loved the scene with the cars at the stoplight. My other favorite chapter was where Azrael, Gabriel, and Metatron have their beachfront argument - everything about that scene just ran true for me.

Yay! This was awesome! And my dad conveniently had end-action movie music playing while I read the end. This was an AMAZING story! Thanks for being awesome and writing it.

Hey. Hey psst! You should maybe... probably... do a epilogue and/or sequel where everyone gets there memories back because of Gabriel and Shawn has to explain... maybe.

I'm so proud of my self for getting the woody-as-zach's-vessel thing!

So i started reading this piece on my way to work on the train and got hooked. Well quess what, i didn't do much work today but this story was worth it. Loved it! And i do hope for a sequel :D!

So... Yeah... I just sat down and read this all in one go. I should pribablyg et some sleep now as it's nearly 4 in the morning.
Thanks for the great, addicting read!

i sacrificed a good nigth of sleep for woeth it

i like how te brain of shawn pass from ensils to death