Slightly predictable, but poetic and very fitting with the LoZ theme.

Such a great story, I love windwaker, don't play much Zelda but windwaker was my first only game I liked and I loved your story

That was amazing, a true adventure form start to finish. I enjoyed every word of it, your fanfiction is a real work of art! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story!

I loved this SO SO much! I can't put into words how much I loved it! It was so perfect! I also loved all the references you made to the other LoZ games, like Skyward Sword and Twilight Princess! You wrote each character perfectly! Ayrill was super sweet and Rinku was chivalrous and more emotional than I thought he would be, but it made him more realistic to me. He didn't show much emotion in the game and that's ok. But you really made him come alive in this. Link and Tetra were also written very well. Tetra was still teasing Link like always. Link was also chivalrous, but still a kid. So he had his squabbles with Tetra and Ayrill. But that also made him very believeable. Everyone else wants on point too. I also loved how Rinku spoke Ancient Hylian, while Link and the other islanders spoke Modern Hylian. Again, AMAZING story and I definitely plan on reading it more than once.

A sweet and melancholy chapter. Interesting ideas about Fado, the koroks, and the deku mask, I like your theories.

You made me laugh at the reminder of Link getting launched, the Hitchiker's reference, and the triumph forks. This story is awesome!

Heh, those fairy queens in OoT were very scary indeed. Glad to see Link shares this opinion.

Lovely story.

*applauds* this was a cool story!

*I* *LOVED* *IT* *TO* *DEATH* ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wonder If The Kid *FINALLY* Got Tetra Pregnant ?
He *DID* Blush A Little *TOO* Much ;)
That Said, You're 150/5 Stars ;)
By The Way, *I'M* *DYING* *TO* *READ* *THE* *NEXT* *CHAPTER* ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It was beautiful! I loved every chapter, but I have to say Im surprised this noe did not end in tragedy as other stories of yours haha

What would I do without my wonderful towel?

After the first two chapters, I was all like "these timelines don't match up AT ALL" but now I'm all "Oh good!"

I wasn't sure how much I would like this, but you did an excellent job! I didn't get all the references, but you successfully tied everything together and balanced the seriousness with a fair bit of humor. I really liked how you integrated all the characters from Wind Waker!

Ahh! It's cute that Rinku is dancing with someone whi is technachly his lilttle sister!

I read this story a while ago, (before I got an account) and loved it. _ Thank you for inspiring me to write my own Wind Waker/Ocarina of Time story, too