10/10 great story super relatable. Wish you had used the word arse since you use many different words for ass.

Hello,
I really love your Fanfiction. It was so cute und sexy
Im from Germany( my english is not so good ) and i want to ask you, to translate this Fanfiction into german!
I hope you allowed I hope my english is not to bad -.-
Sincerely MaggieXD

It is not supossed to bleed. Not if you stretch properly (which was something they ignored here) and how could there be semen if Sanji was using a condom?! Bugs, bugs everywhere.

I love youi hentai's, and I have a request. can u do an usozoro one for me? I would love that.

Haha that was funny. Usopp is such a baby, geeze. :P I enjoyed it anyway! Great job! :)

-Yvonne

Don't break Usopp Sanji, or I'll kick your ass! T3T

Usopp is such a wimp tho lol

Wow perfect imitations of the characters and Usopp was trying to be brave! SHOCKER:P

Interesting, very interesting. Personally I liked the ending best. Usopp's terms are just adorable!

I lurve it

Aww. I really love this pairing. I think they click because Usopp, as we know it, is kind of afraid at times and Sanji is overconfident. LoL. I love the characterization, it's so natural. Amazing fic, First Time I read a SanUso with a lemon. (kind of pun here lol) :) You write them so well.

Also, I love LuZo. AMAZING fic, keep at it. :)

i loved it a lot :)

HOLY CRAP AWESOME I LOVE IT YAY.

*adoring face* This is so sweet 3 And Sanji's an asshole, just like we know him. xD

You really made this adorable. It's the first One Piece smut fic that I've actually enjoyed. Heck, you even made me love the pairing just with this d; so thank you ~

The beginning where Usopp was all scared was just ~so~ cute! Love how he was actually trying to be brave for once :'3

Thanks for writing this 3

the only thought i had here was besides what an amazing lemon this is, was "zorro bottoms?"