i just wanted to pointe out that insomnia is not a choice, but not sleeping is. Insomnia is the inability to fall and stay asleep easily or at all. I don't mean to be rude but I am an insomniac and it does bother me a tad.

This is wonderful- you did a great job with the story!

Hi there!

I love your story and your writting. When are you going to post next chapter? :) Erik and Xavier are just so cute together! :3

English is not your mother language? woah I would love to be as fluent as you are! What is your nationality?

I totally agree with you, parental caring is the main problem of what children see on internet. I also have been restricted by my parents and I thank them. I will do exactly the same thing with my little girl, if not more because the risks have increased since I was a child. Well, parents neglect way to much their education to others and then complain...

So just to tell you that I loved your fic.

See ya!

aww nice i like how it ended

Ah ! Enfin la suite et fin de cette fanfiction ! :D J'aime bien mais j'aurai bien aimé une suite non ?

En tout cas ta fic est super ;)

AW! *U* So sweet! Erik seems so kind, so gentle, here with poor Charles, and I love it! *U* Off to read more! *U*

This chapter is great. I was so into the story and the scenery that when I got to the end of the page I was like, "That's it?". I am very curious to see where this goes.

I love the fact you have taken Eric but made him more approachable through Charles presence. Also, the depth you have gone into for Charles is great. To see the other side of each of them, Charles' own struggle and rage and Eric's softer side is intriguing. I hope a new chapter will come out soon

awww nice i liked it

Oh please do write more! I am completely addicted to this!

Super chapitre, encore ! :p J'imagine bien les cailloux et tout qui volent ! J'ai hâte de lire la suite ! :D

Et sinon, je confirme, il y a des lecteurs français qui sont fanent de ce couple ! Certes on est bien moins nombreux que les anglais, mais c'est toujours le cas de toute façon Donc tu peux écrire des fics en français

i am enjoying this soo much great job i cannot wait for more

Thank you! I love that Charles can finally be himself, ALL of himself, with somebody. ESPECIALLY since that somebody is Erik (Charik fangirl, what can I say?...). Update soon, I love the direction this is going!

Hi :) Your story is actually quite good. But I think the story's perspective is a little bit weird. In one paragraph you use 2nd(or maybe 3rd, I don't know what's it called, english isn't my prime language either) point of view. It made the story a little bit weird(I think). But don't worry, I'm still exited to read the next chapters :D

oh this should be intresting i cannot wiat for more

Je viens de lire sur ton profil que tu étais française Pourquoi n'écris-tu pas cette histoire en français aussi ? Y a tellement peu de fic en français que je suis obligée d'aller les lire en anglais (alors que je suis assez nul ).

En tout cas super chapitre ! J'ai hâte de pouvoir lire la suite !