So good

My heart is figuratively dying right now out of cuteness

It ended too soon... What were the casualties? How many died? What about other stats? Like how many each of them took on? Broken bones? Concussions? Internal bleeding? Nothing?

best fan fic i love it

where is chapter ten?

The whole story was great and I loved the whole game part. I hope you can continue stuff like this.

THIS IS ...
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*scream heard in china*
I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE this so much o

Love this!

cool . r u going to write more like this

started to cry when you said sighning ot for the last time;…(.

i loved the sires.
please make a similar sires w/ the same main idea so that i dont kill my self.
just not suisideal but now i am.i also read from chaper 1.
please please please continu with the siress.
by the way this was my favorate fanfoc EVER and i also love harry potter i own all of the books and mivies i read all of the fanfics i coud find as well.

-isaac smith
love you man you are the best : )

im already insane

MAKE THEM WIN. MAKE THEM WIN.

good one! can't stop reading it

good one again! just go on and you'll be all right

again awesome! keep going!