astrid smirking at her boyfriend hiccup hey i have always wondered how a certain dragon boy kiss

Make a sequel! Make a sequel! Make a sequel!

This is amazing! Your spelling is so much better than most people, I really appreciate that! The story is so good! I love the change you made in Stoick and that we got to see a bit more in the changes of everyone's attitudes towards Hiccup. I would love it if you could add to it a bit? Maybe have Hiccup wake up with Astrid and they have a moment? And then with Stoick and Toothless? Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

great story :)

This was beautiful :')

I love this fanfiction. So much so that it is saved to the background of my iPhone. I have read it a ridiculous amount of times. But can you do me a huge favor? Can you correct the title? You rearranged some of the letters in "strengths".

Aww, this was sweet. Thanks for sharing!

This was long but it was a good character analysis.

amazing! oh i though you should make that fanfiction for Astrid and Hiccup! 3

Hell yes, this was awesome. I loved everything. The emotion - the fear, the worries EVERYTHING :D I know what you mean, I'm writing a Astrid/Hiccup oneshot at the moment and I never thought that it'd be for so long, but I don't have the heart to completely abandon it or delete any scenes either XP LOL. I LOVE YOUR STUFF :L Please update sooon! :D

Pretty good, but got a few things that need to be fixed from my view. The - for when someone is talking is just so...confusing when like no other fanfic, or pro author, would use that. It should be " instead of -.

As for the thinking, " or ' plus making italics is all you need to do. Most people use '.

I love this story! I love the points you brought up and everything. Only 1 thing I would say:

1 sometimes your sentences run on a bit. Try separating more with not as much commas (,)

Just wondering, why do you do dashes (-) when people are talking and not (")?

Anyway, this was really good and you should do another! :)

Well I liked it, but you need to slow down and edit more... a fair bit of spelling errors. Its kind of a nitpick of mine, makes reading a lot harder and distracts from the story... Also "" would be preferred -works-, but its gets a tad confusing when speech stops. I understand you want do thoughts as well but Italics work well for thoughts while quotations can be used for speaking. Would love to see more H/A, it would be pretty cool if you used this as your base... after some editing :D

Great story looking forward to more.

yehhhh First Review D

I agre totally with you "How to train your dragon" is the greatest animation movie since Nemo *.* and your little fic is wonderfull D

**thank you*