Can't believe I had never read this story until now. Since Shamy had gotten married in the series, I felt nostalgic about reading how fanfic writers wrote them early in their relationship. Your depiction of Sheldon and Amy is so spot on! I enjoyed this story very much and like what other reviewers have stated, I could picture them in this story so vividly, saying and doing those things. Bravo to you and your excellent talent in writing! Here's hoping that despite Sheldon and Amy being where we've always envisioned them to be, writers such as you would continue to weave wonderful stories of our unique and adorable couple.

OMG, your writing style is so good, I can actually hear them saying the lines. Wow. And you wrote both Shamy and Lenny so well, so perfectly match. Like when Sheldon and Amy told Leonard and Penny the truth, but both L and P didn't believe them, and both of them laughed so hard. Man, so good. God, how I wish you are writing for the show. Great work and Thank you for sharing with us!

At first I was rather disappointed that Sheldon and Amy didn't engage in coitus, but then it occurred to me that if they had... The whole script might seem like complete poppycock, because none of us are familiar with any interactions that are even slightly related. Therefore, by the way you wrote your script it was like any episode, honest. I adored how I could actually see the characters from the real series within your fan fiction. Bravo and Excelsior!

So SAD for Amy!

Me hubiese gustado que esta historia fuese sido más larga, con más capítulos, porque son muy buenos, si fuera un libro lo compraría,saludos y gracias

So much fluff Much love at you :D

Wow. Just wow. This is legitimately the best fan fic have ever read! I love your Big Bang fan fic soooooo much :)

Jealous Sheldon is my favorite Sheldon

Loved it! They are so cute together!

This was absolutely magnificent. You wrote Sheldon and Amy dialogue better than the writers themselves do. Wow. And I love how you stayed true to their characteristics. I mean, would the real Sheldon have sex because of a negligee? No. But would he kiss Amy after something like that? I like to think he would.
Thank you so much. This is so good. Please keep going!

Chapter 3 had me crying with laughter :)

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL! Oh god... my shipper heart... how Sheldon defended Amy... oh my... *siiiighs*

Great story! Even though you only used a few of the characters, they were all well written. Don't listen to any of the pervs asking you to write it as a soft porn. Trust your gut. This is a really good story!

Wow! Fantastic!

After having read the whole story, I do feel I was hoping for more. ;) Are you going to write anything more, well... bold?

I've just registered on the site to follow your work, I hope you'll continue this thread and write something spicy for Sheldon and Amy. I'm getting tired of waiting for anything to actually happen between them in the series, it seems the producers want to keep this going as it is until the last series fan waiting for some action dies of boredom.

Back to the feedback: nice tension building and very convincing dialogues, matching the characters. I'm glad it was you and not some analphabetic dumbass who decided to write this kind of an episode because I couldn't stand to read it then. The Penny and Leonard thread seems weaker but probably because I'm already bored with this couple, seems to be dried out a bit in the series for some time now. I did suggest I'm just a huge Sheldon fan.

Btw, I am writing fact-based erotic stories, but not in English yet; I can translate one if you'd like and exchange it for the next part of Sheldon-Amy thread. ;)

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