Marion, that was the biggest fucking fail I have ever seen in my entire life. Author, you better not ever let him live this down. And on a side note, why is 5 of the six Wardens males? Just curious.

Maybe Im jumping the guns, but it seems theirs a tiny bit of male favoritism here :3. And no dont try and say, "Well theirs a female Cousland, and Surana." Their not Wardens, their merely Tag-alongs.

Your damn right Templar arts is a magical branch, making them fucking hypocrites. And fuck the Chantry, they can burn for all I care.
Also, author, Im warning ya ahead of time, dont be surprised if later on I get triggered if (Meaning when) any of the female wardens or companions get captured and/or act like emotional cry babies just so the strong muscular man comes in to rescue and/or comfort her.

Let me just say I have loved following this fanfiction it actually inspired me to start writing my own book. I was going through some of my old stared emails and I just cried(happy tears) as I remembered reading these chapters late at night while going through some things at home. It was one of the things that helped me a lot. I don't know who you are or if you still active but I wanted to say thank you and that I always looked forward to those emails. I hope your living your best most fabulous life.

Man, you dropped this fic? please don't drop this fic, or Mairon will feed you to his "pony". Seriously man, this fic is awesome.

Why have you made Cassie orlesian? shes nevarran in canon.

Ahahaha. Durin is so delightfully perceptive!

I've been waiting for a new chapter! That part with Kitty cracked me up! I was dying on the floor with laughter! That part with threatening Matthius was uncalled for, but I get it. Their ALL insane. Finally with Shale, oh! Just as good as Kitty! Hope to see another chapter soon!

Ah, Shale, you're always fun. Too bad we didn't get that chicken crushing scene though. Good thing the raven bit totally made up for it. XD

This is so far my favorite Chapter, yet! I can't tell what my favorite part was through the whole thing!

Loved the fight scenes! Though, the abomination that Revan fought was a bit unexpected.

In all honesty, I'm hoping Mairon will be killed. But, I know his character well enough o know he will never die. :( Even if he is what he is now because of some tragic background, I still want Mairon to die. Though I will admit, I love him at the same time! He's almost like Deadpool!

Whoa. Twist! I thought Revan was the adopted one not his sister! Drama!

So Revan is a spirit warrior now huh? Cool! And I think the darkspawn focus on one country because they need a foothold. An army has to start somewhere.

Hey, Iknow this story doesn't get too many reviews...but I really enjoy it, and I hope it hasn't been abandoned, for those of us who are following you :)

how much longer till the next chapter this is too amazing