I agree with Anais Lacquestar. You did a very good job.

~*~ Alayea ~*~

This was written wonderfully. I think you captured the character of Rodimus Prime perfectly. Now granted it has been a long time since I've seen the Transformers episodes (at least ten years)but I did see the movie and it reminded why I always liked Rodimus Prime better than Optimus. In my own humble opinion you captured the character from the movie perfectly, and one does have to wonder, after watching the end of the movie, exactly how Rodimus was going to deal with being a leader.

Thank you for writing a story that made my day a littler better!