good start and looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

Plz Please go on
This is getting really intresting

Its a great story. UPDATE!Major cliffie. Try making a will be a tell us the title,OK?

Like Kristi, I also read this story as a teenager in High School and absolutely fell in love with it. I would get my parents to print out a new chapter each week and would rush home after school to read it. If I couldn't wait I would also read it online during my lunch breaks.

I'm so glad you have it up on fanfiction, because I too couldn't remember the exact name of the geocities site.

Now I'm 22 and am going to read it all again. I want to say a big Thank You to you! You're brilliant and amazing. Please never take this story down.

xx

I would have signed in, but it's been so long since I got on this website that I don't remember my old login name, unfortunately. I just wanted to say that it's been almost a decade since I read this story, and about 5 years since I've read any fanfiction at all, but I suddenly remembered the name of this story and typed it in, and lo and behold, here it is, still here after all these years. This was once one of my absolute favorite stories, and I just wanted to write a review to let you know that a child who once loved your story remembers it as an adult and is reading it again, a decade later. You know you're a fabulous writer when...

This story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.

I could think of a million other adjectives to describe it, but i'll save you the time.

The characters (Lily) are so unique, and the plotline is certainly one of a kind.

The story is very well written. I LOVED IT.

I know a lot of you are either looking for what happens next or are trying to re-follow this AMAZING author. Either way after some searching I found this old site of her's . the story continues in the middle of this page, also the only way I am able to change chapters/pages is to change the url so in this case change the '6' to a '7' and so forth and so forth! Happy reading!

Wow, now, that was an interesting chapter!:)

2 pointers;)

1. Proff McGonagall's first name is Minerva, unless she is her predecessor.

2. Would an 11 year old have coffee?

I liked this, however and I liked the ending...

Ariana

I liked this chapter; it was really good. I liked the food bit. Two things, what was the title of the chapter meant to be? cause I think there was a mistake? and "she pulled a Sirius" should that be "She pulled on Sirius's arm," or something like that? great chapter.:)

Ari.

I really enjoyed this. I like your writing style.

There were a few spelling mistakes "world you wrote workd" and one other that I noticed, but nothing major.

This was a great chapter and I like how you write the first years :)

I remember reading this story on the HP message boards so long ago..."Please tell me if this is good or not!" - yeah, well, it was incredible. Even though it's been years and years, I still hope you come back to update this story. On someone else's website I remember there was a lot more of this story posted, and I read it, but it still hadn't reached the end, and now all those sites are non-existent.

I hope you come back and finish this, honestly, because it's really kind of amazing. Hey, I came back to update my story after three years! Heh.

wait, was was the present james gave lily?

i hate it

hey when are you goin to make more i mean come on you cant stop there and not write anymore

I really hope that you continue this story (even though it is long) to the point where the Potters are killed.