| Reviews for Bound in Chakra, Bound in Soul |
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Monster King chapter 11 . 11/17/2018 Please continue it soon I hope you have not given up on iy |
BorderLand chapter 7 . 3/23/2018 Cool crimson cat-like eyes or vibrant cerulean blue eyes. Hard to chose. |
BorderLand chapter 4 . 3/23/2018 Kakashi is such a hypocrite at the end of this chapter. Too bad that no one gave him a taste of his own medicine in canon. |
Ash0011 chapter 11 . 10/23/2017 this story is interesting, I always liked seeing the way naruto and kurama interacted |
SoulMore chapter 11 . 7/15/2015 FAN!~ |
JustAFool chapter 1 . 3/13/2015 Nope nothing could go wrong...other than Naruto dying if he didn't get the chakra on time. |
Balfie chapter 11 . 6/10/2014 Please update soon:) thanks! |
Galisaa chapter 9 . 1/8/2014 ch9 so far, I really like it. I've always been a fan on Kyuubi and you've written the story very well so far. I wanted to point out Hating hate can connect later with Naruto's goal of ending hate. I liked the idea very much! I came here for kyububiness but I'm staying for the plot. Your cast of characters is rounded but not all of them feel like they and a point. With the disjointed viewpoints and bouncing back in forth is a tool to use going from something interesting (involving situations) to a half formed retelling of canon (ie: interrupting garaa killing lee). I mean half formed because there was nothing substantial there, it was a basic retelling in as few words as possible explaining what happened. Through into the fact they don't lead anywhere they are skim/skip-able. I also get tired of reading the story in such a slogging after the fact way. Oh, last part is dealing with your shifting of POV of literature. During Naruto/Kyuubi its 3rd person omniscient, the battle with sound 4.5 is 3rd Omni but there is no direct character... eh I mean it spoken like a narrator reading an overview instead of it being in the moment. What I like the most is Kyuubi's character. At the moment it seems to be the main character with Naruto semi protagonist. I can't wait to read more (will later tonight and might review again, pm for Q's or more). I also like how Kyuubi is still genderless and chakra construct. I wonder if your going to go with the simple 'having other forms', or a platonic relationship of love without physical body/form for kyuu (leaving it as a fox), or some other idea you've got. And don't spoil that part please, or any spoils . ...I also haven't looked at the update date or seen the last chapter so there might be a disconnected notice or dead fic but I have hope! Good luck and Have Fun! |
axl88x chapter 11 . 9/25/2013 Ahh! Please update! I like reading this story a lot, so it's almost painful to see that 4 months have already gone by since your last update! On a less dramatic note, I hope the delay isn't due to serious real-life events, but if it happens to be so, then I hope you're doing all right and feel free to ignore the first part of the review. |
Kauris Azurai chapter 11 . 6/3/2013 Dah pony bug! Nhaaaoooooooooooooooooooo! |
Twilight-Lloyd chapter 6 . 5/19/2013 The blended viewpoint is really well done. |
Rc1212 chapter 11 . 5/8/2013 Well this is an interesting story idea. I look forward to seeing where this goes! |
TigrezzTail chapter 11 . 5/1/2013 Hm, wonder how Gaara will feel now that he's known an ounce of peace. Will he fight for it's return? |
RavenWhiteMoi chapter 11 . 5/1/2013 Dude, your story is gooood... XD |
ArthurB chapter 11 . 5/1/2013 looks interesting but not much plot going on, not sure how i feel about the story. i mean yes invasion biju bla bla but where is story going? nvm story is almost 2 years old with only 35k words written and most likely will never be finished. |