Reviews for The Rival North
Guest chapter 3 . 12/2/2017
"The mafia is a blight to your land, but you will go to bed with them against me. You would give them my country, shake their hands, and give them ammunition, even as you fight them in Chicago, in New York….you would give them my Havana."

Look i guess we should disagree with Cuba here since he is "a big scary communist country" but if you think about his history... he is not wrong. Cuba was known as Americas brothel before Castro rose to power.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2017
Lol Russia has 4,000 years of history? Really? :D Russia has a long and rich history but its not that long. You probably confused Russia with China and Japan lol. I think you really should do your research first before posting stories online. It doesnt take long, just open a history book or just use google.

The first Russian nation, Kiev Rus, was formed a little over 1000 years ago. And Russia was formed in the 1500s. The Soviet Union was formed in the 1920s and Russian federation got their independence in 1991. Hope this helped!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
I just found this fanfic and think it is awesome please if you have time and still want to work on it post more :3
FireFox Vixen chapter 7 . 11/2/2015
Love!
ProudCanadianGal101 chapter 7 . 6/29/2014
OH MY GOD! YOU LITERARY KEPT ME UP ALL NIGHT! It is 5 am and the sun is coming up... well that may be a lie...
LilyofAzra chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
I find this story very interesting. I also feel like you are doing a good job describing Ivan's perspective. I'm excited about seeing a BAMF! Matthew.
kawtharthegreat chapter 7 . 11/26/2013
wooooah! go Ivan but seriously cool story please update soon!
Ironsling chapter 7 . 10/13/2013
Cool update this ASAP
NinetailsKyuu9 chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
Amazing! This is a work of art o.O
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Oh my GOSH! This is so AWESOME! Update PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I love this story and I know you haven't updated in like 2 years but still please I can't take cliffhangers!
LasagnaLover chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Please update, PLEASE!

I know you havent updated this in like a year but if ya have time, PLEASE add on another chapter _
mofalle chapter 7 . 5/25/2012
This is a very well written fic. Everything is well thought out and excellently executed. I liked the bond you have between America and Canada. I love special twin connection stories. I really liked England in this. I liked seeing him as Canada's Older Brother, and using his magic. I liked the flashbacks in this chapter, especially first meeting one.

I hope with the school year ending that you will come back to this fic. I want to know if Canada can pull off being America on his birthday. I want to know if Russia acknowledges America's birthday. Does Russia use that vial Cuba gave him? In the end does Canada rescue America?
nobody10901 chapter 7 . 12/31/2011
? CLIFFHANGER! WHY! WHYYYYYYYYYY?

Please update! I WANT TO SEE S SWAYED AMERICA! This is so amazing! You write with incredible and beautiful detail. Brilliant. Wonderful job! I NEED NORE. I MUST see a persuaded America... And the rest of the world's reactions! Please UPDATE! Thanks!
Wolferrath chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This AWESOME FANFIC, must be a comic of Deviantart. I swear that will be so cool.
MargeryDoe chapter 7 . 11/10/2011
I've been reading your fanfic over the past couple days and upon first discovering you already had seven chapters out in such a short period of time I was enthralled. For such a marvelous writer, you definitely have a talent for coming out with fast updates.

I don't usually look for America and Canada pairings just out of personal preference but you have a talent for making their relationship appealing. Your characterization is brilliant as well, it's as if I'm actually reading Hetalia (only with less crack jokes xD). I, against the last reviewer's opinion, do not think you're moving too fast or over looking any of Matthew's shock. Your pace is amazing, I never feel as though you're moving past important details or dragging certain ones out. And just to make a point, it's very possible that Matthew (being part of the government and all that) could handle shock quite well. So I think you did a fabulous job with him coming into the knowledge of Alfred's disappearance.

I'm sorry, I don't mean to argue with your other reviewers, but I don't think L. Lamperouge was truly giving you justice for your story. You tackle the government, historical, personality and time shifting amazingly. The story intertwines, each side melting into the other where I'm just dying to find out Canada and Russia's next move, where I'm desperate to find out what's going to happen next on each side of the world. I just feel as though this reviewer was belittling you. I hope that doesn't offend you or anything, it's not my intention.

Anyway, I admire you, your knowledge on the history background is fantastic. I wish I could write something half as accurate xDDD And your use of description is something. I particularly remember the imagery of Alfred's bomber jacket- it really was quite a perfect description. And when I realized that I'd come to the last chapter you had out I was horrified xDDD I'm dying for your next update but I COMPLETELY understand the importance of school. Updating during the school year is something of a miracle xD;

I wish I could write out a better review, sigh, but it's late right now and I took a math test and blew my brains all over it. xD I'll patiently wait for your next update and hope to redeem myself from this scattered try at telling you how much I appreciate you putting this out here.
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