Haha, you did a good job with the chess. I loved it!

OMG, you're such a cruel girl! I can't stop crying now, this was so painfully romantic! *snifsnif*

OK, I'll just go to the quoting thing, and then to get two or three more tissues Y_Y

""We've started something incredible, Erik." Enthusiasm, excitement, exhilaration. Charles didn't understand why all the words that he was feeling right now started with the letter E."

As I said before, I love this kind of games.

"He would be willing to take twice the hate and three times the hurt if only the world would keep its claws from bearing down on Charles"

Always the protective man, this Erik. It is just so ironic how he is so protective, and still the most harmful one...

"From the first chess game, Erik knew he would be an equal, forever an opponent, all alike. He wouldn't mind playing the villain if only Charles could be the hero who lives at the end."

And this is where my tears start falling, and they don't seem as if they are going to stop any soon, hope you are happy I will look all tomato-eyed in dinner! 3

I really loved this. Truly. So calm and romantic and sad and everything... It really gets to the most beautiful side of Charik.

Kss! F

oh wow...i cried nice job

I really like the last part of your story,i feel so sad reading it...

My love for this knows no bounds. :D It's so perfectly bittersweet. Kudos.

Thank you for sharing, beautifully written and the ending was perfect