This was a really great story! :) I look forward to seeing the rewrite. Ariel's sisters thinking about Ursula reminds me of the original fairy tale where they traded their hair for a knife. i can't wait to see where it goes from here!

I think the reason Ariel never wrote who she was is because of the spell Ursula uses to give her legs also blocks her from writing by making her forget can write or stops her from even trying to write who she actually is.

This is an amazing story! I really hope you continue, Ive loved reading it

Want more!

Are you dead? If not please continue this story and update!

Enjoy the history notes at the end hope the sisters apppear next chapter!

Flounder isn’t a flounder?!

What is Ursula planning?

I wish more fanfics would show Ariel’s sisters.

First chapter got me hooked.

it maKES ME SO ANGRY THAT YOU NEVER FINISHED THIs I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I love this story! I would love to find out what happens!

WHAT YOU MEAN THERE ARE NO MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS?! I love this so much! Ariel has always been my favorite princess and this story is just so intriguing and perfect! I just love the way you try to make everything match up fact-wise, and believe me, it's working hella good. I doubt you'll update this since it's been five years since you last did but well, I can dream to read the end of this someday. Anyways, just wanted to let you know that this really is a great story and that I hope you would finish it! Congrats!

That Was Great

It says that the last time you've updated is Dec 16th.

I have just come across this story and I've really enjoyed the layout and your careful planning and thought put into the story.

Will you be updating anytime soon?