| Reviews for The three of us against the rest of the world |
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  Critical Reader chapter 12 . 7/3/2019 Well the character was only important to the people in the story, not to me. You never wrote anything that would've made him a sympathetic person, on the contrary. He was just an unlikable idiot in this story. |
| Critical Reader chapter 9 . 7/2/2019 "He stayed silent for a few minutes." - should be seconds. Happened in a previous chapter aswell. |
| Critical Reader chapter 8 . 7/2/2019 One week and Fred didn't remember her name? And she's pleased Goerge did? You gave her too weak of a personality I feel, no trace of a dragon slayer of any kind. She's so unsure of herself, it doesn't fit the narrative you want to paint. Also her relationship to her brother nearly sounds like a romance, grown ups just don't behave like that all the time. I guess you don't have a brother/sister, else you would know. You don't snuggle and hold hands with your siblings all the time. |
| Critical Reader chapter 6 . 7/2/2019 Alright, I would've liked Mel to throw some blame towards her brother in their "discussion", but all in all that was quite well handled. On the other hand you need to give Jonathan a really damn good reason for his stupid behaviour, because just saying "I did not want to endanger you." is not good enough. I like that Mel takes action, instead of being a playball that gets thrown around. Pretty good. |
| Critical Reader chapter 4 . 7/2/2019 This is very good so far. Credible, dreadful. Already better than 99% of the other stuff on this site. I'm looking forward to see how she now deals with her brother, him being effectively the reason their parents died. |
 nosurprise chapter 34 . 12/15/2018 Absolutely loved this! Such a sweet fic, and love how you dealt with the final battle and George and Ands getting together. |
| CanIBeAPerson chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 Omg I’m so glad I took the time to read this, the last few chapters had me crying on and off. This was my first FanFiction I’ve read about a muggle and I liked your point of viewthank you so much! |
| Scarlette Winter chapter 12 . 6/18/2017 Holy crap. I am sobbing. |
| Hedwig-is-awesome chapter 34 . 4/6/2017 BEST. HARRY POTTER FANFICTION. EVER. |
| Hedwig-is-awesome chapter 6 . 4/5/2017 I really like it! |
| Hedwig-is-awesome chapter 4 . 4/5/2017 I love it |
| Letheliah chapter 25 . 12/6/2016 Little Jamie sounds adorable! Can't wait to see how Fred tries corrupting him. XD |
| Letheliah chapter 22 . 12/6/2016 Silly Twins should have just asked her from the beginning! Mel is definitely stubborn but she's got a really good heart and I love that about your OC. |
| Letheliah chapter 21 . 12/6/2016 Welp, that was a good chapter. Could have done without my heart getting trampled over, but... You know... It was really good. QwQ RIP Val. |
| Letheliah chapter 20 . 12/6/2016 Lol Bye Alicia~ geeeez she's a bitch in this fic! xd But oh man now I'm nervous for Mel and Ollie and the group, I really hope nothing bad happens to them. QwQ; |
