I loved the story, the concept was great but the language was a bit too formal for a highschool fanfic and for my taste, maybe you could make it a little more informal?not the writing just like word usage and stuff, ukwim?)

I LOVE this! I’m trying to picture your Bella. Height vs weight can make such a difference. For instance, I’m 159 lbs right now. But I’m also 5’7” so it’s not as significant on me as it was on my moms 5”4’ frame. Is your Bella more an Ashley Graham, Denise Bidot, or Candice Huffines or Tess Holiday. I’d love to see more of these types of stories! Thanks for writing!

Hi I really like your book. I just want to tell u that on Wattpad I have put your book on there on my profile please do see it. And if you want me to take it off I will. I just wanted other on the app/website to read your book. I did change some things in the story

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Please see and let me know if you want me to delete

This last line made me think of mean girls

I can't read anymore of this bullshit.
Bella is a dumb bitch.
You wrote:
"You were even more attracted to me then I originally thought. But by then Tanya had her needy little hands all over you and I didn't want to ruin any happiness you might have had if you had changed your mind about Tanya"
Um hellooo, this makes no sense at all. When E is attracted to bigger girls in the beginning. He won't be attracted to thinner girls for gods sake.

Why...WHY?
I can't. I just can't anymore. Every pov sounds the same. There is no difference. None. Change the B in the pov into an E or otherwise and you will see that everything sounds the same.

And can anyone explain me this:
"[...]It has a band of silver jewels that create an empire-waist effect and has pleating above and below."
Really now?! Is Edward a fashion expert? How in gods name would he know what an empire waist effect is?

Oh man...this story makes me cringe more and more the further I read.

Howling with laughter over the spider comment!

This is heartbreaking! Poor Bella :(

Love It!

May seem crazy, but I really identify my self with curvisabella, but for the opposite reason... in Brasil were I live the most aprecciated body kind is usually, big boobs, big ass, thick tighs... I'm 5,6 foot tall and 104 lb, so...

aaaaaaa. aa,:bq

I love this story kinda reminds me of how I felt in high school and still feel

Personally, I think her lack of understanding caused her to overreact. (This is my third or fourth time reading this through.)

Honestly, this story should Really be called "Fat Girls Are Too Insecure".

No dude would want to deal with this Bella in real life. She'd cheat on you just because she's immaturely jealous.

40 chapters in... I think you should rename this Story to. 'Fat Girls Are Too Insecure'