I don’t know how I missed this story before. Great job! You really made the story come to life.

I LOVED THIS!

awesome

wow what a rocky time for Danny and Grace. I was worried for both at times. And Steve was great with Grace. That was nice at the end Danny got a new car. But a picnic with family and friends nice way to bed healed and out of the hospital.

Oh, well thanks a lot...I may have to buy several boxes of Kleenex after this chapter. I loved the image of Grace being the one to figuratively pull Danny back from the edge because of the juxtaposition of a smaller, supposedly 'weaker' person saving the bigger, 'stronger ' person. Beautifully done! You are one of my very favorite authors on this site and I am so happy to have found this new to me story.

I am such a Danny fan so I don't know how I missed your story. I just finished it last night and today I plan on reading it again. I think this is one of the most beautiful writing I have ever read. Some of your lines made me cry and that has never happened for me. I love the little girl that plays Danny's daughter on the show, she is a cutie but I personally think she can't act. While Scott is a natural at it the little girl(can't remember her real name)is not that believable to me. That said it was amazing to imagine while reading your story this beautiful bond between father and daughter. Every other character was perfect as well. Such an amazing overall story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. Hope to read some more from you.

Wow ... just, wow. First of all, congratulations on a wonderfully visualized and wonderfully crafted piece of storytelling. This is, quite possibly, one of the best - if not the best - piece I've seen in the fandom. Everything - from the scene-crafting to the characterization - is right on. I have some minor grumbles in terms of typos appearing throughout, so if you want someone to proof it to clean it all up, please feel free to ask.

This is an absolutely brilliant piece of work. Congratulations again.

So not good! Poor Danny and Poor Grace! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep it up!

Arlothia

Amazing story! Grace's "forgive you" drawing had me at tears. And the whole gang going picnicing. /) nice work

Just finished reading your story. Very well done, and yes, I will even admit that I cried a time or two. What a nice ending with Grace's picture to Evans.

I just read this story in one go, just couldn't stop. Love it!

can't tell u how much i've fallen in love with this fic... but i have... its surely going on my fav lists. I wish I could have more... I love reading fics on steve, danno and grace... though i'd want a little more of sick steve, but god, u did gr8 with steve angst. Loved how he took care of both danno and steve... yep, they're ohana... may be they were brothers in another life. Please write more soon... and if u ever think of following up this fic, please leave me a Pm... i LOVED it soooo very much!

Love,

Krish

This was a very touching, heart-warming story. I enjoyed reading it.

Fantastic, just perfect! Thank you for a great ending!

I really loved it! great! thanks for sharing it with us!