Beautifully written. Touching, descriptively poetic. Totally brought me into the moment.

This was lovely. There may not have been enough Thane/Shep for me but the last paragraph made this story so touching.

i like it!

That was so sad and yet beautiful. I like the premise for this story; that there aren't always happy endings for the heroes, and sometimes the end isn't a particularly epic one.

Great story. Awesome job.

Very sad, but very good.

The story was amazing! It was so well written! It made my eyes water! It was sad. But I loved it! :D