Audrey killing her self after Voldemort died was WACK like she deserved a scene like Harry at least .. not just randomly offing herself while everyone celebrates the defeat of Voldemort...and Harry being the elder wand owner was lame too, they explained it was audreys and that she just gave it away? A Slytherin would never. She was built up really powerful only to have a weak ending.

I’m like happy but unsatisfied...this story was amazing the ending was weak though. I feel like I was led on.. Harry ended up being the saviour and all of Audreys accomplishments basically came to a dead end and now she has this cringe side story that basically copies Harry being a horcrux...it was also kinda embarrassing how her fight with Voldemort was so lame...and now we read like a million words just to find out her magic wasn’t even her own? The ideas great it’s just very underwhelming.

falling in love

hi still here and loving it!

Before this piece I read another fanfiction that was about Harry Potter having a twin, which was longer and had many more reviews. At first it wasn't comfortable because the other one was so good, but I was determined to read this to the end and it didn't disappoint. Both fanfictions had similarities but the difference where really good and worth reading. Overall I do recommend, it was a good read.

still here and longing it!

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hi still here. I don't know if your still reading reviews. so just talking to myself. on to the next chapter

I hope this book is like "to be Slytherin". I've never read it fully through. but this week (hopefully) I will! see you at the end!

what a masterpiece

Hi, I used to review with a user name (incitanemxx) bıt I forgot my password so I'm just going to leave a few words as a guest.
I used to read this story, over and over, as a young adult in the bus while going to school.
The first chapter I stumbled upon was the chapter where the Slytherins meet to drink firewhisky. I started from the beginning and because I read obsessively I quickly catched up.
Over time I lost sight of this story a little bit, now I an an adult not going to school but going to work. But every now and then I would still get an email telling me there's an update and I would always open it. This site has been opened in my Safari app for everrrrrr lol
Anyway I always told myself I'd wait until the story is finished and then I would read it all over again. Which is what I did now. And what can I say. I still love it so much, just like back in the day.
The ending was brilliant. Audrey losing her magic is such a big price to pay but it makes sense and I can really emphasize wirh her. Snape's memories made me cry all over again and Lucius' death was much more sad than it would have been in the books. I actually prefer your version.
There is a lot to say, but I am going to stop here. I'm going to reread the Prelude and I'll leave a few words there, as well. Most importantly I want to thank you for giving us such an amazing story for free and I want to thank you for your hard work. I hope you're well. I will check out your other stories as well.
Thank you for this!

Hi you have probably got a million reviews and wont ever see mine but my good this book was an amazing read genuinely. (Spoilers ahead) Looking back if felt like ages ago i started like remember when audrey had a thing with cedric. It feels like years ago and the way you wrote the relationships like cedric and audrey, fred and audreay and draco and audrey. You wrote them so convincingly that in each of their primes they were my main ships even knowing that she was paired with draco. You made me so upset over the deaths in this book. I remember i thought of cedrics death and the possibilities if he lived multiple times a day. And daphnes wrecked me her sacrifice was just perfect anyway enough of me. Congratulations on a well loved book

damn, I really love cedric in the 4 year, still hoping he would make it out alive, graduate, and joined the orde also started dating audrey and after the war... they got married

i just reached the half of 4 years and it's rough mate, so much drama and I want to slap daphnee and harry so bad. if I was audrey I would ditch hogwarts and move to fleur school, boy is a prat arse, and I prefer girl lol, so I will forfeit from being champion, split the potter inheritance, move to france and enter beauxbaton. voldemort remain in britain after all, why should I care about a brother who doesn't care about me? did harry seriously didn't know audrey fear of water? and malfoy being tsundere is npt helping. I hate to leave theo but, well I prefer girl anyway and hogwarts suck, or maybe I move to ivermory lol, love american culture than britain, no offense. and btw it's just what I would do if I was audrey, the story still lovely

Oops it posted it before I finished typing. Carrying on...

But NOT in the way that he was. The fact that Audrey brewed Liquid Luck and then never used it seriously bugged me. She could have used it when Breaking into Hogwarts or when breaking into Gringots or at literally ANY time she needed a bit of luck. So yeah that was a bit of a wasted plot point.

Overall though this was an incredible read. Again, I can't believe I finished the whole thing in like two weeks. Thank you for sharing the story of Audrey Potter, the girl who lived. I look forward to reading your other work :)