I like where your going with this Sirius ans Severus just have to much hate and history I think Charlie would be a great addition especially as a love interest possibly

I absolutely love the story! Although i nearly broke down crying a few times. Its so sad. I feel so bad for Severus. This really is a heart renching and emotional story but is worth reading. It is well written and displays so much emotion and conflict. Internal and external between Sev and Sirius.

Poor severus
It's a nice fic
I love it
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i don't know about this story as i want to see where it goes first...but it's okay for now.

very cool chapter i like that Charlie was brought into this chapter and how he was with Severus

Wow. A very sensational twist. Their relationship seems amazingly real in a traumatic sort of way. Thanks so much for the chapter because I am officially addicted to your story as it just seems original, but not too unfamiliar.. Update soon! :)

yay! an update! glad you decided to continue with the voices... was beginning to think that you forgot that he was a bit of a paranoid schizophrenic. can't wait until the next chapter!

~Green24

very cool chapter i like the voices in Severus's head

Brilliant update!

I really enjoyed it. And although snape is right in being wary of Sirius, I just wish they would be okay together. Don't get me wrong...I love dominating scary Sirius but sweetness now and then is also nice. Come on sev let him help you!

You strike a perfect balance between tension and calmness. Thanks for a great update!

Oh btw a beta is someone on ff who will read through and edit your work for you.

Nice story! I love it

but there's a lot of things I haven't got - That is part of what makes it interesting w - anyway please update soon!

...and maybe get a beta...

WOW just wow! such different approach of Sirius and severus relationship! this is the first time i've read bout em with a fresh unique angst plot and i love that Harry is in the middle of it too. I hope there will be more characters interactions with the Orders and the deatheaters side too. And development of the war situation (bonus if it is close related to both Sirius & Sev situation XD. SUCH POTENTIAL! i cant wait for the next chapter! keep up the awesome work!

UGH! When are you going to update? I'm going mental with the waiting game haha

This is amazing. I was so happy when I realised you were still updating.

Your writing is so compelling, and I'm unbelievably curious as to what will happen next. Please update soon!

For some reason, I'm going to guess Mad Eye or Remus. Could be McGonagall. I'm in love with this story. It's got such a terrific plot to it! Thanks so much for the chapter! Update soon! :)

very cool chapter i like the way Sirius explained his relationship with Severus

also my vote for the mystery character is Remus