Finally no more scaredy acting from Will. But when does Caleb finally admit his feelings?

After the thought of Will gone, it was reasonable for him to burst. I'm glad that they made up in the end, with the plus of a lil' fluffy thought in Caleb's mind Good job!

Cool keep up the good work! im countin' on ya ok?

This was awesome!

Caleb went to far! She saved Cedric's ass okay... that was a shock, even though she didn't know it was him. I know why he's angry. He was just worried for Will's safety. But I still think he was hard on Cornelia. But Will kept her calm! That was kinda awesome...

Loved the episode! I presume you're going to use stuff from the episode in others, such as Will's "talk" with Caleb, questions or jokes about Will's "immortality" and maybe a still pretty upset Cornelia.

Awesomeness of Will..enter!

Woohoo! I loved this part! Maybe because I'm a heavy Will fan... Still very good job!

I'm sad that it's just a small chapter but hopefully I can read more tonight, and else I have to wait.

I laughed at Cornelia's reaction on Will's appearance at the bookstore. She must be angry now that she can't show off and that Will's there without that anyone knew. XD

Fifht element huh? Wonder what that might be? XD

Just kidding. This should be rather annoying for Caleb. Seeing Will without powers while she's supposed to have them.

And Corny tries to take lead...this can blow up in her face XD

Great chapter!

Somewhere...I feel sorry for Elyon... I mean getting ditched is awful...

Great chapter!

At least you show Elyon's suspicions! And Blunk as a Dutch girl? I'm hurt! I mean eew! He is cute though. XD

Nice chappie!

Poor Will, that had to sting! I feel bad for her... Elyon should get a kick for that...

And will Caleb settle his doubts? I guess I will see that in later episodes. For now it's alright.

The rebels are coming...will W.I.T.C.H. be in time to stop this?

Can't wait for the next chapter! *squeal!*

Woohoo! New chapter! Just wondering why you're putting Will's "tragic" past in it... But it's cool!

Nice going! I'm thinking...are you going to have the whole invasion thing in the book store etc? You know, with Will willing to sacrifice herself for Cedric and then she miraculously survives and all? Cause I can really see that fitting into this! Sudden "new" power of Will, Cornelia finally accepting Will as a leader and well... Elyon...you can at least have her being a bit more bitchy towards Will and unknowingly postpone her from meeting the girls at the bookshop.

Cause how the girls met Galgheita in the cartoon was just plain stupid. It was like: 'Hey! There is a monster!'

'No girls! I'm your math teacher!'

'Okay.'

Then at least you could introduce Galgheita as she should be, considering that she played a HUGE part in the story with bringing Elyon. You just don't have to let her tell that it was her who brought Elyon. You can preserve that for later episodes

Loved it how you woke Caleb! Boy, is he going to hate Irma! I know I would.

And what will Phobos do with Cedric?

Great start! Ill be looking out for the next chapter!

Ps. Why did Caleb say Will? or are you going to explain it in this episode? or did he have another ''dirty'' dream about Will?