My love, where have you been all my life?

A very touching piece. It actually made me cry a bit, you did a very nice job writing this. One of the best stories I've ever read on the site imo.

Brilliant story

That was one of the most beautiful, poignant, and PAINFUL things I have ever read. I have so many feelings it's going to take a bit to sort them out, but I have nothing but love for this story of yours. This was amazing. Thank you for writing it.

Well, I must say: The message is irrelevant to the secular, but it is still poetically appeasing in its portrayal. Satan taught love via a Pokeball. Nicely done.

I crieeeedd so much feels...

I cried so hard when I read the endieng very good job.

Fuuuuuuuuuu
Even though deep down you know what's gonna happen
I cried
Dammit
This is pokemon not grave of the fireflies

haha its ok i wanted to sob uncontrollably

This was absolutely amazing! Your words painted the entire story so beautifully that I really felt I was within it. The comparasion to the Sinnoh myths and the Bible really tied together and expanded my perspective of the Pokemon world. Giratina's emotions were so vivid and powerful, it really broke my heart. Really nice story:) Thanks for writing it!

Every time I read this it makes me cry :') good job

Beautifully written. It was heartbreaking, how Giratina plunged itself and Dawn into the star when she died. But also satisfying to know that it grew to love her in the end. *sniffles*

This is amazing, the first time I read it I cried I also greatly like how it is from giratinas point of view, The theory that giratinas name isn't actually his original name and the theory that he was different colours before the distoration world. Could you make anothet one where he flies to palkia and dialga? And him remembering his name, but then discarding it. It. Is. Beautiful. Amazing. 20 kazzilion stars!

This was beautiful. It's like poetry laid out in story format. I've never read anything like this, actually. It was very emotional and it just looked so professional. Very unique style of writing and I hope you keep on writing

Oh, my gosh...this story was amazing. Thanks so much for writing this! It gave me a lot to think about afterwards, and it really touched me. Giratina has always been my favorite Legendary Pokemon, and I really appreciate your writing about it. Like your other stories, this is filled with emotion. I cried the first time I read it (and yes, I've read this more than once!).
I loved the way the world was pure and peaceful in the beginning with Pokemon, and then humans came and ruined it. I understand why Giratina would feel bitter towards that and want revenge. Throughout the whole story, I could really relate to how Giratina felt. The way Giratina was banished to the Distortion World was amazingly written. I really loved the moment when Giratina decided to fight for Dawn and defeated Garchomp, too. Dawn's death was really sad...it had just the right amount of emotion in it. The ending was amazing as well. Haha, sorry if I'm rambling on and on. I don't have a favorite part, though. I can't choose...every part of this story is so wonderful.
Thanks again for writing! Keep on writing awesome stories like this!