Oh, dear, that's depressing. I'm not even a serious fred/luna shipper, but that was absolutely grim :'(

Love it

Heart wrenching.
You're going to write a best seller someday. I'm not going to even attempt to conceal my admiration, and consequently my envy. You write so well- be encouraged in your talents.

Wow, you are a great writer! it was original to use the lasts they shared instead of the firsts! i think you made it more heartbreaking that way. thanks for the great story.

Oh my god! It was so sad and beautiful. I can't stop crying I love this so much!

Literally so sad:(

But a really nice peice of writing at the same time:)

Would be intresting if you explored the Fred and Luna ship a bit more?

Oh my goodness! This was so sad! I swear, tears were threatening to fall from my eyes!

I had never thought of Fred and Luna being together but your story made me cry so much that I think it would have been a good idea.. :(

Though I wanted to cry, this is beautiful and I love it!

I've never actually thought of Fred and Luna as a couple (I was kinda for Neville/Luna), but this story completely blew me away! It was just SO BEAUTIFUL! I couldn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes and it was so moving. The repetition of "She wants him back" actually made my eyes water! And the part about the coat? And the wailing she didn't realize was hers at first? And how she couldn't look at George? I have no words.

So basically, I loved it! Great (and I mean GREAT) job on this!

I love this. It's almost like freeverse, but it isn't. But I have to say, I could definitely feel Luna's sadness. Awesome story!