Wow, how ridiculously sad... beautifully written and no errors that I could discern. You wrote this as if it were completely a muggle story. Replace the names and the word Muggle and it could apply to anyone really, so I can't really rate it on conforming to character.

But otherwise, I really really did like the writing here. The descriptions were perfect and the dialogue was entertaining. And Victoire's faithfulness to Teddy was really sweet.

Oh wow.

This was beautifully written and I haven't read something like this in a long time.

And although I do ship Rose/Scorpius I found this utterly wonderful.

Great job!

Very sweet.