Reviews for The Scarlet
Guest chapter 15 . 2/1
I love the way this story was constructed.
Max and Goofy's part must be one of my favorites. Their dynamics are like in canon but more extreme, which at first was saddening but also captivating and in the end turned into something beautiful.
I also enjoyed the progress of Daisy's view on the higher classes. The fake wedding scene when she realized they were all just people no matter how rich or poor was amazing.
Donald was great as always, even though I didn't think I'd like him that much at the beginning when he was trying to buy Daisy's love with his uncle's wealth, but oh boy, was I wrong about him! He just continued to prove himself more and more and it didn't take long for me to start appreciating his character.
And I enjoyed Mickey's double identity a lot - it reminds me of his double role in The Prince and the Pauper. Also loved the mirror nightmare scene, such a classic but so well done. Minnie wasn't your best Minnie I've seen so far but she was still pretty cool.
I admit, I didn't expect Mickey and Minnie's childhood playmates to have any role beyond Minnie's memories so the ending was a rather pleasant surprise.
Another thing that impressed me was the villains. Especially Fantome, he was such a good villain... in the most evil way, of course.
All in all, great job again! I'm starting to run out of your longer stories to read, which is unfortunate, but thankfully still got quite a few of the shorter ones. And I'm going to - goin' - gunna read them all! :D
The Imaginative Lightbulb chapter 15 . 12/3/2018
This story was absolutely lovely.

I search through the sea of Disney Fanfiction from time to time & struggle to find novels that are actually good. But, when I stumbled across this novel, I completely fell in love. The sensational six have always held a special place in my heart, & when combining the features of good storytelling & steampunk, I could hardly keep my eyes off the screen.

I'm currently reading another one of your fabulous sensational six fanfictions, and I stopped by to congratulate you on the success of this story. It's lovely to see a fanfiction of this quality, and I can tell you spent time with this. This was a perfect blend of what makes our classic Mickey Mouse a wonderful character. Thank you. Thank you for this beautifully crafted story.

From, The Imaginative Lightbulb.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/15/2018
Thank you for the fun, action-packed story. Hope you have a nice day.
ltm2000 chapter 15 . 9/2/2017
This Is One Of The Best Stories That i Have Read And I Thank You For The Amazing Time I had While Doing So
Guest chapter 15 . 11/29/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY..SO SAD IT ENDED!BUT THANK YOU FOR MAKING ONE OF MY FAVS FANFICTIONS EVER!
YarningChick chapter 15 . 9/1/2016
Okay, one, this story was amazing. Two, despite myself, I kept picturing Ratigan as Fantome. Thanks for an awesome read!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Whenever mickey is in a mask cape rogue mysterious shrouded in darkness and secrets scifi creature outlaw that is when I get hooked
LilPotterfanfic chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
So, I just discovered that you are the sole author of every single one of my favorite Disney fanfictions on this website... Bow down to the mighty!
blondiespotandink chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
You mate are just incredible! I marvel (love) your work - u kinda gave me the guts to start a fanfic of my own. Now i know im not the only one who writes about this kind of stuff. I hope this doesn't sound cheesy but consider me a huge fan of yours. I look up to u and twisted-wind alot; i draw and write - changing but using Disney characters. U r brilliant.
NearlyHuman chapter 15 . 11/9/2012
It's great to see a Fanfic of this quality. You wrote the characters very well, the prose flowed very well and was lovely to read. There were a few grammar problems but mostly really good.

The only thing I didn't like was the inclusion of Kingdom Hearts characters. This is purely a personal preference. While I do like Kingdom Hearts I don't consider them Disney characters, also the world you had set up was purely the Mouse universe so I found there inclusion unwelcome. This is a minor niggle though as they weren't in the story very much and as I said, purely a personal preference. I suppose the only other option would have been OC's, so I understand.

But great little story. Will definitely have to look into what else you've written mate )
Reese S. Quill chapter 15 . 10/24/2012
That was *awesome.* A perfect blend of everything that makes a Mickey Mouse movie great. In fact, I kinda wish this /was/ a movie (in fact, I wish they would make a new Mickey Mouse movie, /any/ Mickey Movie, at all). I loved all their personalities and backstories, and how you managed to make them blend all together. The twist about one of their playmates being the Queen was brilliant, too. I do still wonder what happened after the revolution, though. Didn't it mean that the Queen would lose her place? Oh, well, I doubt she'd really mind.

C'est magnifique!
inujisan chapter 7 . 9/25/2012
love love LOVE the story.
I was like "hey, that sounds like Twisted Wind's story"
but then I remembered that she liked to illustrate the stories. So you're the real writer? Well hats off to you. Planning to read more later on
GrossGirl18 chapter 15 . 8/12/2012
What a wonderful ending. I always did like purple and red together... :)
GrossGirl18 chapter 13 . 8/12/2012
Uh-oh... looks like trouble, and puzzle pieces are starting to fall into place (although I realized it was Goofy who started the first Blood Sunday when they mentioned the letter). It seems everything really is connected, huh?
Four things, however, are wrong with this picture:
1. Velvet is a fabric, but not a color.
2. When you wrote Madam Guillotine, I'm pretty sure guillotine was supposed to be capitalized, because by naming it, you made it into a proper noun.
3. When Ludwig was talking and Gyro stepped up to take over, you said Gyro waved himself off, instead of Ludwig waving Gyro off.
4. In that same instance, you wrote 'Gyro stepped over, offering to take over.' This may just be personal preference, but you used the word over twice. In general, it just flows better if you use different wording, such as saying ' Gyro stepped up, offering to take over' instead.
Anyway, this story is worthy of my highest praise, so please don't take offence from any of what I said, because I meant it only as constructive criticism.
GrossGirl18 chapter 9 . 8/12/2012
I KNEW it! I KNEW Katarina was the mole!
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