There are alot of mistakes. for example when hermione reffered to hayley and Ron as "you boys" or when fred spoke of hayley saying "he's a bit scrawny" or something of the like. if u need a beta, id be happy to assist. but the story is very very wonderful overall

good hope for more

I like it so far hope you will continue it so I can read more.

I loved the story so far, and I absolutely adore femHarry/Hermione stories. Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon.

Hope you get back to this story soon I really enjoyed it :D

You made a mistake. In England, 'pants' means underwear and trousers is what they call pants like jeans.

nice can't wait to read more

love it

very cool fanfic

very cool

very well done

nice

Like it

So I saw this on a forum (or what I assume is a forum, I don't know much about that) and decided to check it out for the promise of fem!harry and {insert female character} romance. I see it's going to take a while to turn to that action :( Oh well, patience is a virtue. I don't like how this story sticks to cannon, I know, I know, it'll branch out. But I would like to see some different dynamics, the books left out so much potential awesomeness! The books lachted onto Voldemort, and that's understandible, but because of that we didn't get to expeirence the school, students, proffesors, and all the little quirks that come with living in a magical FREAKING castle with dozens of other people from (I assume) different cultaral background.
So update as soon as you can, remeber that proofreading's your best friend, and that having a gaint block of text is unappealing (enter, enter, enter). :D

Come on Riza! update this baby! I love that it's technically H/HR story and that its a girl is a bonus!