Glad to see they have a happy ending.

I liked the action you put in.

I know what it's like to not be able to get back into your writing.

Keep up the good work.

ZR };-

Thank you for your hard work. I really appreciate an author who sticks by a story and finishes it no matter how long it takes. For your first story it's pretty darn good I think. And multiple chapters is tough to do as well, so kudos to you. I still hope you find writing enjoyable and continue as you are able to. I loved your story of Natsuki taking apart through bike and then having the person pay her to put it back together...that was classic. Best of luck in your future.
Jay

Finallly after soooo looooooong you finished it. I really apreciated that.

exente capitulo...

Greetings Taichi Takuya! Oh yeah! I just had to re-read this fic because I really love it! Ah the trust and connection between Shiz and Nat is amazing. I love the Shiz POV and how Nat's character is young but mature since she lived off the streets, she should be mature or street smart.

I hope college is treating you well and hopefully, you will have time to give your readers some new chapters!

Take care...ciao and I am anxious to see more chapters from you!

Greetings Taichi Takuya! I'm not sure how I stumbled acrossed your fic fanfiction blog but I'm feeling mightly happy and elated!

So it's chapter 2 and I love the flow of the plot...not to slow. I'm enjoying the POV from both Shiz and Nat. I also love the interaction between them...connection of eyes and trust.

Okay, onward to the next chapters.

I hope my review gets to you!

Please update! It has been years #cry

updatte

cute :3

muy buena la historia te felicito me ha encantado pero me intriga saber porque la tienes paralizada si es muy buena, sobre todo en la parte donde se a quedado , ya solo me restas decirte que estare esperando con muchas ansias tu proxima actualizacion O.o porque la habra VERDA, solo espero que no te tome mucho mas tiempo en subir la continuacion porque verdadeamente esta muy buena la historia :)

te envio un gran beso y abrazo y nos estaremos viendo en tu siguiente actualizacion :D jejeje

update pls. ...

hola
como le va es este tiempo ya aun año desde que lei el capitulo 12
ojala que el siguiente no se tarde mucho por favor por favor
saludos hasta pronto

Thank you for such a fun and enjoyable story. I like the characters because of the lack of angst. I kind of get tired of them being so conflicted or in constant mortal danger without any humor (read the story called Natsuki v1, which is awesome). This is a nice change of pace. So, thank you very much for taking time out of your life for our (my) enjoyment.

Hihi! That's a good one! Thanks for the update dear author! I love it!

That was such a sweet chapter! I like the ShizNat bits a lot! Keep em coming!