| Reviews for Unconditional Love |
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   CeciliaWinnifer chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 Just by reading your summary I can tell that you really need to work on your English. Or get someone to Beta read it... A good summary is what attracts the reader first so work hard on that. |
| xty chapter 22 . 5/24/2018 this is so fucked up. I wanted alois to have a happy nice story your a good writer needs more practice but awesome. thanks for your story. love, love. 3 |
| allielovethatfanfic chapter 22 . 7/1/2017 I'm like 97% sure you updated this, even though the log says it wasn't updated since October 2013 o.o This story was tragedy mixed with... idk. Indescribableness! Thank you and stay creative o |
| LADY OF BLACK SNOW chapter 15 . 11/3/2015 b |
| LightSam6161 chapter 3 . 9/10/2014 I really like this story so far, but that doesn't mean that it doesn't have problems. For starters, there are A LOT of misspellings and grammatical errors. Firstly, there are some parts where you use the wrong words. (like "by" instead of "with", or "on" instead of "in") Secondly, there are lots of parts where you either make a word past-tense or plural when it doesn't need to be. (Like, using "confuses" when it should be "confused" or saying "orders" when it should be "order") Please, please, just PLEASE, check your spelling! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/3/2014 Shit Claude. You creepy bastard . . . |
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/28/2014 I was listening to a playlist then I started crying and I realized that the song that was playing was Someone Like You by Adele. I love this story. You really did an amazing job! |
| pokegem chapter 23 . 4/23/2014 WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!I lurves the story,but I NEVER liked Alois in the first reminds me of IS SAD.I mean,real in,I tried not to cry while reading this buuuuuuttttt,I still YOU AUTHOR FOR MAKING AN AWSOME YET SICKENING STORY! |
| LeLaMikuHatsune chapter 23 . 1/25/2014 Haha that A/N ... Exactly the same with me... I love your story. Normally I don't read fanfiction this long but I like this story so much. |
| Poopie Head chapter 7 . 1/10/2014 Knew it! |
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 24 . 11/16/2013 All for an alternate ending but not a sequel, at least not a long one |
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 23 . 11/16/2013 I'm crying again! |
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 22 . 11/16/2013 Ok crying a lot right now, what the hell did Alice do to get a life like this? Feel bad for Jim to |
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 18 . 11/16/2013 Mad you have to hate demons for there unfeeling creepy ways |
| Saliboku chapter 22 . 11/14/2013 You are an amazing writer! i was so into it! like legit. I was glued to my seat.. My eyes started to well up in tears then i started smiling then i was shocked all of these emotions are in your story! you are amzing! 3 -faints - |
