Reviews for Master of Shadows
Moleluv chapter 4 . 7/13
I feel like an alternative title ought to be:
“How To Take Over The World With Kage Bunshin by Uzumaki Naruto.”
Chemnerd263 chapter 14 . 5/20
I very much enjoy this story as the logical (or illogical) extreme of what shadow clones can do. If you haven't read "A Drop of Poison" it has a similar premise as you use.
CthuluWarlock chapter 14 . 3/7
Soo close but soo very very far
Whodatken2 chapter 10 . 1/26
This is one of the best fanfiction I read it's funny creative I love it.
RFDN chapter 14 . 12/6/2019
This is an amazing story. It's funny as hell and even to a small degree believable. The Story is very well written. Ths only issue I have is that in a single night Naruto was able to create 8 separate personalities that were distinct from him, and that Shadowclones cut down training in the way the manga suggests solely because that isn't how it would really work.
CRA2Y S7EVE chapter 14 . 9/23/2019
My dad has this quote, no clue if he made it or got it from somewhere, but it goes "You will always be your own biggest critic."
I think it applies here.

This story was very well written, had some excellent humor, and had minimal errors and other discrepancies. Your style is also amazingly comfortable, before I realized it, I had finished the entire thing in one sitting.
Not an easy thing to do for someone like me (A.D.D.).
Either way, if you ever do decide to finish/rewrite this story or not... thank you for writing it in the first place.
hiddensplinter chapter 14 . 9/12/2019
Great story. Please keep 'em coming.
Cezar A FG chapter 14 . 7/25/2019
siguele
Guest chapter 14 . 6/20/2019
This story is really good, I hope you finish it soon.
UzuUzuUzu chapter 14 . 6/4/2019
Please new chapter... pretty pleaaase.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/10/2019
What of kusa their just as strong luna maybe
Selet chapter 14 . 4/20/2019
The numbers are ridiculously low.. go watch the 4th shinobi world war. between all the main countries there are about 100,000 shinobi over the rank of Genin. So probably 25,000 in konoha and kumo who took the least losses in past wars, the others covering the rest being around 17,000 shinobi each. And that isn't counting the genin that each country left behind. The amount of clones infiltrating is probably too high as well, as a few dozen here and there over several months might not be noticed, but a spike in even 1/25th of their population would have immediate notice. I'd say for Konoha alone, there would be maybe 20 or less 'Elite' Jonin, while being 1,000 - 2,000 regular and special jonin. 15-20,000 chunin, and the rest being genin. just during the chunin exams, we saw a few dozen chunin monitoring the written test, not counting the plants in the room for them to cheat off. the would definitely not pull a third of their chunin off their duties to the village for just that exam. Just by the size of the villages alone, they would need hundreds, if not a thousand anbu to maintain security, let alone being able to go out on missions as well. But yeah, just go watch the Fourth Shinobi war to get an idea on how many ninja are in the villages right now. In each area they fought reannimations, there were a few hundred other ninja in the areas, and just with Temari when they went up against Madara, there was a few thousand behind her there. Most of the war wasn't even shown, besides maybe short clips here and there. But Naruto made hundreds of shadow clones that spread out across the battlefield, showing maybe 10 of them in what they did in those battles. I love the idea, but you are just thinking way too small in the numbers.
ItsMeMarissaaa chapter 14 . 3/2/2019
I love your story!
Right What Is Wrong chapter 13 . 1/13/2019
...wait. If Naruto somehow got Rinnegan, could he use clones as his Six Paths?

Hm.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 12 . 1/13/2019
The clone swarm beats the crap out of shukaku. Neat. Wonder how much more grinding it'll take until they can zerg rush the Akatsuki.
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