Awwww

So, I actually had already read this when I got the alert, because someone reblogged it and it showed up on my dashboard on tumblr.

I really like how you put this together, with all the things Tony didn't expect. Maybe you could do one with stuff Ziva didn't expect from this episode!

Great job.

-Grace

veryyy goooddd,congratulation

awesome!

I must say when I saw the alert I was expecting something reality was better;)

Cause I had the time to read it and write a review:

It's so fluffy!It's so fluffy I'm gonna die!

Awesome story, I really hope this is Tiva's "season" (as in they FINALLLY get together). But alas I dobt they will :(... At least we have Fanfiction to tide us over! Very well done, can't wait for more!

short and sweet, a lovely surprise to come home from work to!

i love this story, awesome job

I love how this story is written, like outtakes of the episodes, things we haven't been allowed to see. lovely! Alerted!

I really loved this chapter! :) Great job - again ;)

LOVE IT!

''he had said it a thousand times, he would always be amazed at how well she seemed to fit to his body, it was, as if, they were made for each other.''

I could read that again and again and never get tired of this!

Thank you soooooo much for this storyYour flawless writing never ever fails to amaze me!

Oh,Megan I know my Saturday is going to be great,cause reading your update was the first thing I did:D

"Before her eyes glazed over and sleep seemed like it was inevitable, he brought her into his chest, if he had said it once, he had said it a thousand times, he would always be amazed at how well she seemed to fit to his body, it was, as if, they were made for each other. Not that he would ever say something like that out loud, at this point in their relationship. But, he was certainly thinking it, and he sometimes got the feeling, when looking into her eyes, that she thought the same thing, that she felt the same way. Her eyes never shut up, after all."

I might be a little in love with that part.

I love these little moments so much, it feels so right to imagine them just crawling into each other's beds and fall asleep together like this, with just the right amount of teasing and talking and cuddling and kissing and ARG I just want them to get there right now...

Great job my Megan 3 As always.

Can't wait for more!

Nice chapter :)

It is short, but I did like it! It seems so them, from the point where he tracks her movements through the apartment to the point where she starts counting the things to his heart, haha. I had to laugh at the irony of her creeping into the apartment only to get onto the bed and ask him if he was awake though, lol!

I love, love, love the last sentence. And I love the way they fell asleep! Oh, the last paragraph is beautiful.

~Soph

a very good chapter