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Guest chapter 9 . 4/7 This is an amazing story! It is hilarious and just perfect. I love how much the two change each other |
natysc chapter 6 . 11/24/2018 Nooo, It's been 6 years since the last update ! This story is too amazing to stop like that ! Dx |
LunarCatNinja chapter 9 . 9/30/2018 This is ADORABLE and I LOVE IT! So cute! |
Langas chapter 9 . 3/8/2018 Great story |
bunnyhathat21 chapter 9 . 1/13/2018 update this story is really good |
kaede kayano chapter 9 . 11/2/2016 Normally, I'm a NejiTen fan. However, this fanfiction is absolutely. AH-MAY-ZING. Shikamaru is totally in character, as is Tenten (well, Tenten's personality is more adaptable and versatile than most, but still. Amazing). Now that I think about it, Tenten actually does kind of fit Shikamaru's "future goal." Please please please UPDATE! It's been so long, but I really love this fic! |
Sakura Chara chapter 9 . 8/14/2016 D-san, this fic... IS AMAZING~! I LOVE IT~! PLEASE GIMME MORE~! PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE~! Heck, I'll give you cookies~! Here, take them~! *throws cookies over* Please update soon (if you can)? Thanks for the good read either way, and hope to see ya soon~! ~Kura |
fringeperson chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 Excuse me while I re-read this wonderful, wonderful fic. And quietly fangirl over it. |
SilentMidnight2 chapter 9 . 11/19/2015 I really hope you continue this story. It's great. :) |
kffs chapter 9 . 6/24/2015 Super fun thanks for sharing |
Manillalu chapter 2 . 6/12/2015 The fanboy troubles shikamaru's has to deal with is absolutely hilarious. And I bet it won't stop, especially after his fire duel with temari. Amazing absolutely amazing. Cutest thing ever. Especially ino's shock about shikamaru's lady killer smile. All the sweet subtle fluff is just beautifully done |
Manillalu chapter 9 . 6/12/2015 Oh my god. This is the freaking cutest couple in the WORLD. You've converted me |
IrregardlessAEnthusiast chapter 9 . 3/3/2015 Usually I don't do this...but please update! Now, to my review... I absolutely adored this story, pairing two usually not-associated people together? A completely original idea. I love Tenten, but the fact that it always had to be with Neji - for all purposes not needing to be explained, was mundane. She's a character not expanded on in the canon and in this fanfiction universe, which I believe is a waste because one can write about her with more freedom than, say, Sakura because we do not receive a deep character depth from the mangaka himself. Your implicitly placed humor, while staying canon AND in-character, was genius. Pure genius. The fact that Shikamaru is my favorite male character from Naruto universe, helps too. I will definitely favorite, but do you have any plan to continue? Thankks |
secretslockedintheheart chapter 9 . 11/7/2014 love this-can't wait for the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/9/2014 lol, issocute! |