Beautiful language choices were made here. Loved it, especially the ticker tape stinging against her neck.

I loved it! You capture them so well, so beautifully. It's so vivid, I can picture it so clearly.

I'd love to read more!

It's short but poignant, it says so much with so few words.

The imagery you evoke is so vivid. I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. And may I suggest more coffee? ;")

I think you did a really good job capturing the emotions and motivations of the characters. The writing is also quite good, it flowed and no mistakes.