| Reviews for When Love Starts, it's Uncontrollable |
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   Pumpkin Cupcake chapter 1 . 2/11/2012 Please update soon!:) Sent from my iPod touch via Pocket Fiction |
| theSecretNiinja chapter 1 . 1/13/2012 Hey! Update soon, this one was great! |
| OceanAvenue97 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011 Aww, Kiara and Kovu are so adorable together :3 I really hope you continue with the drabbles, because my instincts tell me that this is going to be good! |
| DJ chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 SO basicaly the other think was just a buch of poems and sonets and that is waht is will be right? Yes I do agree with you Nala had barly any screan time and should have had more time in lion king II. also if you notice orgianly Nala had sea green eyes and then they made her have pure blue eyes. Oh well |
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 i think so |
| KShara Khan chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 The answer to your question, if Nala should have had more time in Lion King 2! "YES" As for the rest of this story, please keep it going! |
| lokitaa10 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 Nice start, but i think you should make your chapters/ pharagraphs a more longer. Give more description about the setting of the chapter, like a blazing hot savannah, or a colorful sunset(: good job anyways cant wait to see how it turns out update soon! A: yes i think nala should of came out more, as well as zazu and other characters of the first movie -lokitaa10 |
| chaosblast321 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 One void chapter I'll keep myself posted on this one too! 2: I agree 100% bout the Nala thing she got what 5 minutes tops? 3: again great chapter and I can wait for more! Catch ya later Nala! Strike the Wolf out! |
